rate_review Reviews

This is a beautifully crafted story. It's refreshing to find a story with characters that are developed carefully, and the fact that it isn't rushed at all really seals the deal here. I love the interactions between the two, and everything feels natural as one things leads to another. This story is truly a gem and I hope you guys continue to write. Absolutely wonderful. Congrats.

So happy to see you've shared this tale. It is delightfully crafted and endearing. The characters are lovable and memorable. Glad to see my "old" friend posting again!

Chin up. Keep writing. Good things for you are in store, I know!

PW

A truly wonderful story.Josh and Chris really made a lasting impression.This was a truly original cliche (does that even make sense? :) )that really managed to move me.So thank you a lot!

Omg, I just saw this early this morning (2AM) on the other site you posted it and saw that it was TWENTY THOUSAND words!!! lol So I decided to wait till later to read it. :)

Now I can comment on both sites. lol

This was very cute and had me on the edge of my seat nearly the whole time I was reading. Good job!