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for Captain Popinjay

by RiskaIke

schedule February 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I can't wait to see what happens next. If you have a mailing list, please add me. Xoxo Robin
person guestyguest
schedule December 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Prepare him for WHAT? Gosh cliffies always do this to me. I won't be able to sleep until the next chapter gets posted...
person Jenny
schedule September 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hello, your story is awesome. I am excited for the next update. I went to your profile and got hooked with tristar, will you be updating that???
person moon1958
schedule September 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story! Love the cliffhanger! Thank you!
person RJaneyP
schedule August 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yo it would be nice to have some background on your plant rapist, or is just some mindless dirty tenticules monster? G
person lividfire
schedule August 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I review almost every story I read so my memory is mushy ( m'not sure what I wrote, it involved that I would not liek to read tentacle rape. but this wasn't rape. strictly.) and can't find my review, anyway I like captai n's ethnicity, his dreams of a 'normal' life( life is normal even without children and a partner. you just have to be normal all by yourself ;) THe plant sounds very slimey and ugly...so unless it turns into a humanoid shape and shows some ..uh how do you say on english when something is self-aware and has a mind of its own....

anyway, this is all I have to say about this chapter.
P:S I love the title of this story, still:D
person Anon
schedule August 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please don't forget Tristar!!!
schedule August 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This looks good! Keep up the updates, I'm excited to see how this plant comes into play! Great writing also :)

XoXo
person lividfire
schedule August 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
say NO to tentacle rape:D
oh, this is going to be FUNXD