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for Turmoil

by traxie

schedule August 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Omg, you're back. Love your stories. Can't wait for another update.
person snowleopard
schedule August 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Traxie! You are back!!!!! I hope to see you around more often now, pretty please?

I like Colt and the fact he's trying to help London to live a more normal teenager's life is very impressive. He's a good parent role model figure for Lonny.

I am afraid to get back into reading this story too much in case you don't update again for months. I had to go back and read all the chapters to refresh what has happened to date.

I am glad you are alright too! Welcome back!

person snowleopard
schedule August 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Um, just a reminder of this note you posted at the beginning of chapter 1. (This was my Nanowrimo 2010 project. It is in need of heavy editing and is still missing an ending but I have the most of it already writen.)

So, please post all the chapters soon!

Oh, and write more stories but only after you write the ending for this one.
person miles
schedule August 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ohh ! I missed this ! Thank you for the update. :)
The boy just need some rules in his life, and maybe Colt will be able to tame him.
I really feel sorry for London. He's clearly traumatised.
New chapter soon ? :))
person snowleopard
schedule August 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Morning! I am really worried about you because we haven't heard anything from you since February. Please be alright and safe.
person Anon
schedule July 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Please update and don't abandon this story!
person miles
schedule June 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I miss you...
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule April 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hi traxie, just dropping by to check in and see how you are doing.
person Jessie
schedule February 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
What a relief that it finally seems like things are starting to take a better turn for Lonny but why am I worried so much? I keep waiting for the you know what to hit the fan again. Very pleased you updated again.
person Jayden
schedule February 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I think this move is a good thing for London even though he doesn't realize it yet. I am kind of pissed at Elliot and Colt for not being there for him during the rough times with his biological father. I hope he can find peace of sorts now and make new friends.