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So so glad to see you updating again :)

I'm glad Lonny isn't in that crappy snitch situation anymore but oddly enough I was beginning to not dislike the jerky cop so much once I started catching up.. Kind of miss him now, after the bust and even during I feel that he was trying to look out for Lonny in his own way. Even though it's probably the source of Lonnie's trauma I believe he made him look at the corpse because he didn't want to see Lonny ending up like that at least I'm hoping that was his only reason.. despite his intentions that was still pretty horrible

Also colt is giving me the creeps it could just all be in Lonnie's head but probably not, and the affect colt is having on Lonny worries me. I really hope he isn't a closet rapist or something

I'm very much looking forward to your next update! This story is getting more and more interesting ;)

Please write more of this story please!

Oh my gosh! I am so happy you are back to updating Turmoil again, thank you!

I am really enjoying reading this part of story with London and Colt but do miss Novak and Elliot.

It's nice to see London and Colt getting along I hope London opens up even more to him, eventually.

~ Katie ~

Thanks for the update. I am happy London is safe now with family that cares for him.

I am so happy you updated again so fast! Thank you so very much! I feel so much better now about London now that Colt is back in his life. I really like Colt a lot and the fact that he told his friend Tom that he was his son made my heart melt like warm butter.

I hope London makes some new friends too! Still waiting for him to open up more to Colt but see it coming.

Hope to see you back again soon!

Hugs, snowy.

Yay ! Thank you for the fast update ! Like the old good time ! :))
London's going to live a normal teenager's life for once. But, can he really escape his past ?
We'll see...

Thank u for update. I like Colt but i want to see Novak again too. Please update soon :)

Good to see you have updated again. I think Colt is making some progress with Lonny but he still has a long way to go in order to gain his trust. I hope Novak pays them a visit soon!

Traxie!!!!!! I was so excited to get the email that you had updated Turmoil.

I think London needs a strong parental figure like Colt in his life. He needs stability and to know someone actually cares about him and who won't hurt him. I hope he meets some nice kids at school and gets a new outlook on life. I hope that London opens up to Colt about everything. He needs to let it all out because it's destroying him almost like a cancer and I think Colt can handle it.

Great chapter but long time coming, but well worth the wait!

Please don't take too long to update again.

OMG, it's been way too long and RL really must have hit you in the butt!

It's nice to see this story being updated again.

I hope that Colt can help Lonny. The kid is so messed up and doesn't trust adults. I hope someday he opens up to someone about what he went through while in the care of his asshole father and maybe that will be Colt because I think the guy really loves him.