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by traxie

person Loki
schedule December 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Traxie, If your schedule allows, please update soon. Thank you!
person Captain_Crunch
schedule December 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM

I am new reading stories here and just discovered this story today and read it all in one sitting only to discover it's still a WIP. I really would appreciate, when you have time, to finish writing this story. I would love to find out where you are going with this.
person Anon
schedule November 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Traxie Could u please update this story?I really love your story.thank u :)
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule September 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
It's great seeing this story updated again. Hmm, will Taylor become a love interest for Lonny? I was hoping Novak but he's been out of the picture so long now I've sort of forgotten about him, lol.

I am mad at Elliot. It would have done Lonny good to see his brother again.

Colt is working wonders with Lonny and he's acting more like a normal teenager should

person amoxi
schedule September 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really love all your stories but I'm kinda beginning to get impatient concerning where this one's heading romantically uhuhuh...but still thanks for writing!
person CelticThunderFan
schedule September 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
So, I always thought (going by the couplings in your other stories) that Novak and Lonny were going to be together. Although, I am not sure since he is an officer of the law and Lonny is underage so don't think that would work out because he could lose his job. So, are Taylor and Lonny going to end up together? I was thinking, wouldn't it be crazy if Taylor was related somehow to Novak.
person snowleopard
schedule September 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow, was this two updates in one month? Hey you are on a roll!!!! Lucky for us.

I wonder why Elliot didn't come and visit. He's being kind of mean to Lonny. I still like Colt and think he's helping him a lot along with Tom.

This Tyler seems to have a chip on his shoulder. I wonder whether him and Lonny will eventually become friends or will he cause him trouble at school and with Colt. Colt and Lonny are getting along pretty good so I would hate to see that messed up. I hope Colt figures out Lonny is still having nightmares and that's why he's not sleeping and still tired during the day.

I hope you can keep up with the fast updates!



person miles
schedule September 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
So happy to see an update ! :))
I wonder why Tyler try to hurt London. He's weird.
Maybe he's jealous because of Colt or something like that. O.o
person Jayden
schedule September 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
What is Tyler's problem with Lonny?

I am mad at Elliot for not coming to see his brother. I hope Colt really called him and didn't lie to Lonny.

I enjoyed reading this new chapter.

Hope to read more soon.
person ruby
schedule September 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Thank u for update