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for Turmoil

by traxie

person Anon
schedule March 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh, please update again soon!

Do you have these stories posted anywhere else?
person Olaf
schedule February 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I am glad I found this and stopped to read it. You are a very good writer with a great imagination and I hope you continue this and write more stories to share.
person CelticThunderFan
schedule February 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back, Traxie! Oh, how I've missed you and Happy Belated 2015!

I enjoyed reading the new chapter and Tyler is starting to grow on me so I hope he grows on Lonny too. I am relieved Lonny has a more stable life now and can live more like a teenager should with Colt than he did living in the city with Elliot. I don't hang around here any more due to the lack of addictive stories and updates on ones I used to follow so was happy to get the email you had updated Turmoil.

person Dean
schedule February 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Could u please make the story a little romantic?!
person msdids
schedule February 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I hate Novak. What an asshole.
schedule February 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ch 16

Lol called it!! I knew Tyler would end up being the tutor.. Poor Lonny and his crap luck can't wait for more!
person miles
schedule February 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh ! Oh ! New chapter ! Yeah !
I think Colt will manage to tame London at the end. The boy seems less difficult already.
Can't wait to know what's going to happen with Tyler... :)
Update soon, please.
person Anon
schedule February 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Is Colt really London's biological dad? I am kind of confused about that now. It would be great for Lonny though. What's up with Elliot? I sort of like Tyler now that I am getting to know him.
person Anon
schedule January 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Happy New Year, Traxie! Please continue this story! I want to see how it ends and what happens to London!
person lavi1443
schedule December 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I like it till now. The story is very originall and interesting, im actually waiting to read the next chapters

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