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by traxie

schedule January 30, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Ch 23

Oh man this update completely made my week! Thanks so much!! I guess I'm finally starting to warm up to Novak a little.. Still not completely over all the shit he's done but he's making it easier to forget
person klara
schedule October 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I like this story, hopefully there will be more of it soon, please!!! :)
person Anon
schedule August 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wish you could find time to update but you are probably getting ready to start school or something. Hope you are well and that you one day finish this story and write more of them.
schedule June 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story!!!! I just could not stop reading once I started! Hope to see a new update soon!
person missi
schedule June 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Hopefully, Novak's intentions will be revealed soon. Novak is an interesting character, but I wonder if he's trying to help Lonny or manipulate him. Great story! Can't wait for the next chapter.
person Lavi1443
schedule June 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
New update!!!
Somehow I have the feeling that you try to upate more frequently but you also shorten the chapters, I remember you writing something about it.
I want you to know, as someone who reads you story for quite a long while, that it's totally fine to update only once in a while and post only long chapters!
You should write the way which is more comfortable for you! the readers will still be here to read the update no matter how long it takes <3
person CelticThunderFan
schedule June 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I wish Colt would forgive Lonny soon. I want to know what Novak is up to. Super chapter!
person CelticThunderFan
schedule June 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, I meant Tyler not Colt!
person miles
schedule June 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Updaaate ! Thank you ! :)
I don't understand what Novak wants ! To be friend ? More ?
I'm happy to know you have sort out the story ! :)
person amoxi
schedule May 31, 2015 at 12:00 AM
See, I really really love your stories (I have read all of them) but I just don't know where you're getting with this one. Whereas a slow build-up is really fine with me I feel like I'm getting impatient with this one. Is this a romantic story or not? I mean it kinda got more exciting when things progressed with Tyler but now that trail seems cold again (to say it with Colts words).

I really like Novak, hell I always love your dominant characters because they're soo rough and ambivalent. I wish I could finally see what Novak's intentions are...this is killing me, seriously.

Still, I love to read more, I mean eventually we must be getting somewhere huh? Thanks for writing!