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for Turmoil

by traxie

person Anon
schedule February 12, 2016 at 12:00 AM
OMG,thank you so much for the update!! It literally made my day :D And Novak? Oh, be still my perverted heart...A little bit of roughhousing and my mind is a messsss. Can't wait wait to see it what unfolds Anyways, your stories never disappoint ;) Hope you're doing well!
person Lavi1443
schedule February 11, 2016 at 12:00 AM
un update yayyyyy loved it !!
person miles
schedule February 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the fast update ! :) Novak is gay too, right ? I hope they're going to be together one day... And he's right, London is a coward sometimes ! Well, he's young. Until the next chapter :))
person Avelynn
schedule February 9, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Omg, it's so effing good to have you back! I missed this story so much you wouldn'r believe it. I can't really believe Elliot is reacting that way. I'm starting to think he is not really good for London :/
person miles
schedule January 31, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the update ! :)
It's great to know this story is not dead.
Novak is like the white knight. lol I wonder if he know about London being gay...
Colt and E were just shocked I think. I hope they're not going to reject him... :(
Great chapter like always.
person Tris
schedule January 31, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Hey Traxie, I haven't read a line from your new story yet and I'm not going to till it's finished because it's the only way to properly enjoy your awesome writing. Just wanted to tell you that I'm always overjoyed when I see a new update and that I can't wait till the story is complete. I'm totally in love with your other works (my fave is probably Forgotten) and I love the way you write your characters. Noone does angst like you.
person Lazy
schedule January 31, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Nice story. Poor London though,I didn't expect that kind of reaction from his brother. Novak is turning out to be little bit nicer than before and Tyler is... hopefully out of the picture at least he won't get my vote in the future :/
I look forward to the next chapter! :D
person mistfox
schedule January 30, 2016 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! You're back!!!! *hugs tight!!!* i missed you!
and i missed Lonny and his foul mouth too! XD
I enjoy all of your stories here! So glad that you did not abandon this story.
you take care now! i shall eagerly wait for the next chapter patiently. :D
xxx
person Dave
schedule January 30, 2016 at 12:00 AM
It's good to see you again traxie. Thank you for update.
person Missy
schedule January 30, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update--it's one of my favorite stories!