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I really have no idea where you are going with this but am thinking maybe that hunky Det guy will have Elliot go undercover in a drug sting type of operation.

Liking this for sure. I know editing can be a bitch but I can't wait to read more!

Traxie, you have made my day by posting this new story so fast!

I can't get enough of your stories and characters, and the worlds you create.

I really admire Elliot for being responsible for his younger brother and think that Lonny should be more appreciative towards him instead of being whiney. Elliot could have just left him to the system and he was young enough himself not to have to add a kid brother to his own plate and it must not have been easy for him.

I hope we see a lot of Elliot in this story.

Hey Traxie, I am so excited about this new story and happy you have most of it written so hope updates will be frequent. I like Elliot but London seems like a brat and I just hope he doesn't cause even more trouble for his older brother.

So fast ! I already like this new story !
I guess the past is going to matter ?! Right ?
London and Elliot, love the names...

I am so excited to start a new journey with these characters. I've been a fan of your writing for a while now. I'm glad you've finished your other stories and even more happy to see that you've posted a new one! I can't wait to see where this one goes!

You're back! That didn't take long, thank goodness. Elliot kind of reminds me of Rio, LOL. I love the name London but wonder how Lonny lived it down in school without getting picked on. He seems different than the characters in your other stories; Colan and Devin. I don't think he's as weak or helpless as they were which probably will be a good thing for whatever is coming his way. Oh my gosh, was he sexually molested or prostituted off by his real father as a child? I hope you can update every day until finished!

good start! I will definitely be keeping an eye on this one!

WOW this one sounds GREAT! I can't wait to read more! read ya laters!