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Fast update ! Thank you ! :)
Poor Lonny. Novak doesn't give him a break !
It's like he's training him or something... Don't run, don't talk back, do what I want...

That Novak is bad news for Lonny and what is he trying to do, get him killed or give him a heart attack by chasing him like that with his car?!!! Seriously, dude, you need to chill out and give the kid a break. I bet that Elliot is not going to be too happy getting another call that Lonny is in jail again.

Welcome back Traxie! Great start to what seems like a very interesting new story. I am already hooked! Good job and I can't wait to read more.

Sorry for the late review ! :)
I just want for London to tell fuck off to the detective !
Novak must had 'smell' London's crush... And he's going to use him... :(
Great story so far ! Thanks Traxie !

I don't know why but I kind of don't feel sorry for Lonny because he's kind of a wise ass but I do like Elliot very much. I am interested in knowing what Elliot and Lonny look like too. Det. Novak is one hot piece of ass (sorry) and I like how he calls Lonny dwarf, it's cute. So, I wonder why kind of trouble he's going to find himself in now that he's a mole for the police and just how far Tony will go when he finds out.

Thanks for the quick update, Traxie!

Sorry, I didn't realize you had updated this yesterday and somehow bi-passed it. I don't know if you have a mailing list for updates on your stories but had asked you to add me if you did. I guess you don't so I will have to be more observant.

I really hope that Lonny quits smoking, he's killing himself and spitting up mucus from his lungs is not a good sign.

I wonder if Novak will let Lonny tell Elliot about what he's doing to help the police.

I will try and be more careful to catch updates, Katie.

I just got home from work, was late because I missed my bus and had to wait for the next one to come by!

I think eventually the ever sexy and observant Det. Novak is going to notice Lonny keeps having a tenting problem....... This is starting to get good but what will Elliot do to Lonny now and if he grounds him again like permanently than how can he spy on Tony?

Oh, I leave early in the morning for work so in case I happen to get online before I have to run down the hill to catch the bus I will reviewing then but other wise it has to be later after I get home from work.

I have a bad nagging feeling Lonny is heading into deep you know what and that next time Elliot won't be able to bail him out!

Looking forward to next chapter!

Please keep plugging them out!

Oh, and Traxie can you please add me to your update mailing list.

Thanks, Katie.

I was just lurking around a bit before going out and was reading through reviews on stories I am reading and saw that I goofed with my last one. I am sure you know that I meant it was Lonny not Elliot that I bet the hunky det guy might send out on an undercover sting. I read so many stories sometimes I even put the wrong character names in the wrong review for the wrong stories!

I went to a wedding yesterday and paying now for having to much too drink and need to run out to Dunkin and get a large black coffee.

I admire Lonny for staying with his friend Tony and not leaving him when he was wasted but they shouldn't have been there in the first place. I wonder if we will be seeing more of Detective Novak.

What does Elliot do for a living? Does he work at a hospital? Is he a nurse?

Thanks for updating so fast, your rock!