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I've been lurking around here all morning waiting for updates on stories I follow but nothing until now! I am glad we found out that Elliot is a Paramedic that would explain his weird hours at work. It's also a very stressful job and on top of that he has a delinquent kid brother at home to deal with. So, Novak was a little bit nicer this time around but if he did break the door down how would Lonny explain that to Elliot? I am worried that Lonny is going to get in too deep and will eventually need rescuing from Novak.

Thanks for the update! I don't understand why there are not more reviews and figure it must be because people are on vacation or just haven't realized you have posted another new story so soon. They are losing out because you are updating this one super fast and I am enjoying it immensely.

Grrr ! Novak has no right to enter London's house like that !!
He's a real bastard ! ^^'
Strong word but there is very much tension in this story too.
I just love it ! Like your other stories ! Thank you for the fast update... :))

Hi, Traxie! I am really getting pissed off at Novak. First, for putting Lonny in a dangerous situation and doing it behind Elliot's back. He's a minor for gosh sake. He better keep him safe. Although, right now I think Lonny is in more danger from Novak. I breathed a sigh of relief when he left Fizzy's apartment. Oh, what do the initials M.D. stand for? He doesn't seem to trust Lonny and I hope he doesn't cause him any trouble. Hugs, Katie.

Again I find myself hooked to another one of your story, and what is awesome is you go on and finish your stories. I am a huge fan of your past stories and have loved every one of them, loved the characters you have let us know, the storylines you have presented...much, much thanks.

I am beginning to believe that Novak is stalking poor Lonny. Elliot is working his butt off as a paramedic and Novak is harassing Lonny plus coming into his home without him even knowing it. I hope he waited the whole time Lonny was at Fizzy's just in case he got into trouble and that he followed him back home afterwards to make sure he got home safe and that he just didn't take off once he dropped him off. Reading this update made my entire weekend, now back to the grind tomorrow.

I'm really enjoying this story. Lonny is an excellent main character and every scene with Novak is just thrumming with sexual tension. I love the unfolding plotline. Can't wait to see where this goes.

Looking forward to the next chapter! :)

I too love the sexual tension that is just steaming off of Lonny and Novak. I am loving this plot but am very worried for Lonny's welfare. I hope he doesn't get hooked on drugs before this is over. I hope Elliot figures out something fishy is going on between his brother and Det. Novak too but maybe it's better if he doesn't and safer for him too.

Hi Traxie and thanks for adding me to your update email list! I got it and it wasn't sent to my spam like some other are.

Novak is an asshole and I hope Elliot notices the new bruises on Lonny and presses charges against the jerk for police brutality against a minor! Does he have to be such a prick? I am beginning not to like him. I really wish Lonny would quit smoking because it's killing him. I actually felt rather bad for Lonny this time, he was rather a little pathetic in a sad sort of way. Elliot is trying to be a good brother and I hope he doesn't give up on him because I think things are going to get worse for Lonny before they get better.

I love this new story. Oh, when you sent me the email I didn't notice other names listed on it for your other readers like I do from authors whose mailing I am on for updates. I hope they are getting your update messages. You might want to double check that

Read you later, Katie.

When I read your story I remembered the lyrics of a song:
''Tequila in his heartbeat
his veins burned gasoline
It kept his motor running
But it never kept it clean''
lol xD
Anyway,your story is really interesting so far
Keep it up!Your stories are the best! ^_^
Oh,and Traxie can you please add me to your update mailing list.
Thanks,Sandy.

I think poor Lon is in way too deep with Novak and more shit is going to hit the fan. Elliot seems at the end of his rope with his brother and I hope he doesn't kick him out. This story kicks ass and I am loving it. Why is Novak so mean to Lon and do his superiors know he is using the kid to catch a drug lord? He deserves to loose his badge especially if something bad happens to Lon.