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Well, at least nothing bad happened to Lonny like I thought but what Elliot did to him is unforgivable. I mean I know Elliot is stressed out and probably overworked but he told his brother he would never hit him and he did! Well, he punched him in the face which is worse than slapping him. Who did Elliot see that looked familiar at the police station and Novak was trying to keep him from seeing? There are so many unanswered questions that I need to know but will wait until the rest of story unfolds. I was very pleased to see you had updated. Thanks!

So glad Lonny deleted those messages from Novak! Smart boy. I did think it was a bit soon for him to be found out. He's not exactly an 'inside man' yet, is he?

This chapter made me feel sorry for Lonny. His friends are suspicious of him, his principle is sick of the sight of him, not a single shit was given by Novak and E doesn't understand why Lonny's so exhausted.

E was wrong to hit Lonny but he regretted it immediately. He's trying to keep what he sees as a troubled young man on the straight and narrow. If Lonny explained his situation to E and showed him a text from Novak, would E believe him? That would be the only way out of this situation, I think.

I wonder where Lonny will go. Probably to see Tony and Fizzy, right? Will Novak even care that Lonny's future is in tatters? Or will he just be happy that Lonny's in a better position to mingle with the criminals?

And who the heck was the 'familiar' person Lonny caught a brief glimpse of at the station? I almost missed that part, which I suppose is the point because the moment was so brief that even Lonny didn't give it a second thought.

Loving this story. Looking forward to the next chapter! XD

Hi, Traxie!

I feel really bad for Lonny now and know that Elliot didn't mean to hit him. I really wish that Lonny would tell his brother what Novak is having him do because I think Elliot would help and be able to protect him from Novak. Now, I am upset because Lonny will probably end up staying with Tony, Fizzy and M.D. so who knows what will happen to him especially when they find out he is a snitch working for Novak. Oh, what is Novak up to and who is that 'familiar' person Lonny saw at the precinct?

Later, Katie.

Dude, thanks so much for updating. I hope Lonny's life gets easier soon and can't believe his bro punched him like that and there is no excuse for it. Novak is a piece of shit on a stick.

Hi Traxie, I got home from work about a half hour ago and decided to check AFF for updates before I had supper and here I still am reading and reviewing stories. Oh my gosh, why did Elliot hit Lonny? I hope he tries to find him. I hope Novak is happy now because it's totally his frigging fault. I am worried Lonny will run to Tony and end up staying in that den full of druggies. I was sort of angry with Lonny before because of how hard Elliot was trying to make things work between them and keep Lonny out of the system but now he's on my shit list.

Traxie, I was yelling at Elliot well really at my LT, "Stop, what the hell are you doing?" I can't believe he hurt Lonny like that! I can't see Lonny come back to live with Elliot again not after this. I just hope Lonny doesn't end up getting more hurt because of the actions of Elliot and Novak. I thought it strange that the female officer who directed Lonny to Novak looked surprised he was there to see him. It makes me believe that Novak is dirty. Why can't Novak see what he's doing to Lonny and that he's going to make a mistake sooner than later if he can't get any rest.

Update soon, please! I need to know where and who Lonny is with!

I love this new story Traxie. Det. Novak is going to get Lonny into trouble. I hope Lonny gets through this alright.

I like how the story is going so far, but Novak is such a dick, I kinda want to bitchslap him for dragging an underage boy out for his own purposes and forcing him to go back alone.

Yay ! Update !
I'm afraid of the worst for Lonny ! It's all Novak's fault !
Now, they know the cop phoned London... What's going to happened to him ?
And E ? T.T