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Yippee!!!! Thank you!!!!! I have been dying to read another new chapter to find out where Lonny ran off too. Thank goodness Elliot and him made up but I hope it lasts but what will Elliot do when he eventually finds out what Lonny is up too. Then, he'll blame him and not Novak because he doesn't know about what the Det. is having Lonny do and the danger he is in. Lonny is really going to be in major trouble if Geoff or Fizzy finds out he's working for Novak. Please let him be safe!

I really like the story so far, so keep it up! I do hope that this story will be a little different than your previous ones when it comes to the relationship development between the two characters that get together (in this case, I am guessing Lonny and Novak). I'd like to see what happens in the relationship between them and not have the story end when they finally show there are feelings between them.

Poor Elliott. He doesn't know what his brother's going to do.
It's the beginning of the end... :(
And Novak is going to hurt London ! I just know it !
Thanks for the update :)

Yeah, update, I was so happy to see a notification in my inbox!

I am really worried about Lonny's health and hope he eventually stops smoking before he gets lung cancer.

Why didn't Elliot answer any of Lonny's calls but at least he's happy to have his kid brother home again and it was starting to take a toll on him worrying about Lonny too. I am glad they are back together again because Lonny needs his brother more than anything.

I kind of missed Novak and wonder what he's up too.

Geoff knew Lonny and Elliot's father? Wow, small world but it doesn't surprise because the guy was bad news so happy he's at least out of the picture and can't hurt Lonny anymore.

Until next update, Katie.

I am relieved Lonny is back with Elliot and really hope that Elliot figures out something is wrong and that Lonny is in deep trouble and needs his help. I am really afraid for Elliot and that he is going to get hurt bad in one way or another. If Fizzy figures out that Lonny is working for Novak, or worse Geoff does, than things are only going to get worse for Lonny. What is M.D.'s problem? Thanks for the update.

Please update when you have the time, please. I really like this story and want to know why Elliot hit Lonny after he had promised never to do that and where did Lonny run to?

Ch 2 review

This story had a good start and I can see a lot of creative potential here ;)

Idk why but I just get the feeling that this Novak guy will be the reason why Lonny's unwillingly thrown into that situation described in the synopsis... Either that or he'll be the one to bring Lonny back from it and comfort him.. Or maybe he'll do both lol

I was just reading through the chapters again trying to figure out who was with Novak at the station that Lonny thought looked familiar but didn't get a good look I am guessing and am wondering was it Fizzy or M.D.? Is one of them working deep undercover?

What just happened? Why did Elliot hit Lonny knowing their father abused him and he had promised never to hit him! What's going on? I am so angry with Elliot right now and if he only knew what Lonny was being subject to by Det. Novak then he wouldn't have hit Lonny he would have knocked out Novak! I hope he doesn't jump out of the frying pan and into the fire (is that the right saying?).

ToT...
The all situation is so sad... E is the one who care the most and now that...