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Traxie!!!!! Welcome back and how I have missed you!!!!! Wow, two updates at one time that is a great Christmas present and a nice surprise too.

Oh my gosh! I never saw this coming what an amazing twist to story! I am relieved it's over for Lonny and he is no longer in any danger but felt bad about his friend Tony getting killed. What happened? Why did the police kill him, did he pull out a gun at them?

I am excited about the next update in the New Year so will check back with you next week sometime!

Happy New Year!

M.D. aka Shawn, well now everything is starting to make sense to me and he must have been the guy at the precinct that time Lonny thought he heard a familiar voice or thought someone looked familiar can't remember which right now, LOL. That would also explain why M.D. was looking strangely at Lonny in his bedroom and saw the bruises on his arm knew it was Novak. Is Novak his partner? I feel really bad for Tony getting killed and Lonny being forced to see his body by Novak. I still don't understand why Novak was such a dirt bag to him but guess he had to play the role of bad cop and did it to perfection in my book. I hope Elliot gives Novak and Shawn, hell, the whole police force a piece of his mind for using his kid brother without his permission since he is still a minor. I do like this softer side of Novak and hope to see more of it. See you again soon I hope, Katie.

Hi and welcome back, Traxie! This was the best Christmas gift ever! I know it's not in the Christmas spirit BUT I really dislike Novak. He's going to get Lonnie killed. I hope Elliot doesn't get upset with Lonnie should he find out he's hanging around and involved deep with a drug gang. I wish Lonnie would tell him what Novak is having him do because maybe he can help his brother. Of all the men you have written about and that took me awhile to fall in love with I don't think that's going to happen with Novak. He's different from your other characters. I still want to know why he signaled out Lonnie and has it in for him. He seems to really hate the kid. I hope you can get back to updating this more often.

Thanks, Katie.

I love your new story.Give us another update soon :)

Please update soon!

Please continue this story!

Hi Traxie! I just wanted to drop by and see how you are doing, as well as, wish you and your family a very Happy and blessed Thanksgiving. Take care and hope to see you back to writing soon.

Hey Dude, I am very relieved that Lonny is back home with his bro but worried about him getting in deep shit with these drug dealers.

Oh my gosh, poor Lonny and things just seem to be getting worse for him. I wish Elliot would notice something is off about him before things get too out of hand so he could put a stop to it and let Lonny know what Novak is having him do is not legal.

Oh, poop, Lonny is getting himself in really deep with this dirt rags and Novak better be keeping an eye on him so nothing bad happens. I hope he doesn't end up having to take drugs to prove his loyalty to Fizzy and Geoff because he has enough on his plate plus the smoking is slowly killing him (and there are warning signs already that he is ignoring) but getting hooked on drugs is seriously a very bad thing. I hope Elliot beats the crap out of Novak for the danger he's putting Lonny in without his consent since he's a minor! Thanks for the update, I love your stories. I panic you will disappear like so many authors already have from AFF. If you ever post anywhere else, please let us know in your profile page.