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I hope Elliot punches Novak in the nose! What is Novak going to tell Elliot that he doesn't want Lonny to hear? I have a feeling the s-h--t is going to hit the fan soon. I keep waiting for some kind of fall out from all that happened and that Lonny will be in danger the drug lord out for revenge.

I can't wait to find the reason behind why Lonny was involved and will he be in any danger or need police protection should he have to testify! Great chapter!

I had a bad day at work today so going to bed but wanted to let you know that I am glad Elliot knows everything now. Did Novak really not know he caused those bruises on Lonny?! Seriously?! I wonder what he thought of Lonnie's statement... will he hand all the pages in?

Did Novak really just think that Lonny was going to forget how he bad he treated him? He still has a lot to atone for in his treatment of Lonny. Why, he even threw him up against the wall and I was worried his wound would start bleeding again. I wonder if Elliot will find out his kid brother got grazed by a bullet. Does Novak know what Lonny's father did to him? I have a feeling that Lonny's troubles are not yet over. I really enjoyed this chapter and hope you can update again soon! ~ Katie ~

Happy 2014! So relieved Lonny is out of danger now for the healing to begin.

I love this story so far and I'm desperate for more! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter and seeing what happens next!!

Happy New Year! I was worried you wouldn't update before '2014' so it's a nice surprise.

I am still rather angry with Novak but now see there was a reason behind his madness and all. I hope Lonny can get over the trauma of seeing Tony's bullet ridden body too that would cause me to have nightmares.

See you next year!

I am so confused why Novak was so mean to Lonny and even physically abused him when no one was around. I know he had to make it seem real so Lonny wouldn't be in any danger and believe that Novak really had it in for him but geeze Novak went the extra mile to be horrible to him. I like Shawn (M.D.) and wonder did he send Lonny to the kitchen cause he knew what was going to happen? Lonny was thrown to the floor in the kitchen, was that Novak? Were they trying to protect him from the gunfire? I love this story and was so happy to see you had updated again so fast!

Ahah ! You clever author ! I positively love the twist ! :)
The poor boy is in shock ! And Novak remorseful ! At last ! After all he did !
I wish you all the best, peace and love for the new year...

Happy New Year, Traxie!

Oh my gosh, I loved this twist to story and am so happy that Lonny is out of the line of fire now. I think Elliot is going to be so angry when he finds out they used Lonny to catch drug dealers like that. I don't think he should be kept in the dark about this so hope he finds out. Wow, Novak isn't such a bad dude after all but he still has a lot to atone for with his treatment of Lonny and some apologizing to do too.