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by traxie

person Katniss Everdeen
schedule February 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Yippee, update!

I've missed them. Lonnie really is messed up and I think Elliot could have handled things better but I do like Colt and can't wait to find out more about him and how he kept legal guardianship of Lonnie even after he left to live with is abusive father.

Where is Novak? I miss him.
person miles
schedule February 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Interesting twist. A new home for London, but I don't know if I like Colt. Waiting for more of him...
Of course London is still shocked. Poor boy. The adults try to help him but I'm not sure it's the right way.
Thank you for the update :))
Take care...
person dazedandconfused
schedule February 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
What brought this about? Was this decision to send Lonnie to stay with Colt something Elliot and Novak came up with to protect Lonnie from the backlash of what happened? I was so happy to find you had updated.
person CelticThunderFan
schedule February 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a twist that I didn't see coming. Elliot sort of betrayed London. He's been in contact with Colt all this time and never told him until he's sending him to stay with him. That's so not cool. I think Lonnie needs this and that maybe Colt will be a good 'father' figure that he's never had in his life. I am not sure what happened or the reason behind Elliot sending him to stay with Colt and am very interested in finding out.
person Anon
schedule January 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I am very disappointed there was no update on this last Sunday and hope you are not going to make your readers wait forever to update again. I liked the weekly updates. This happens to me all the time and there will probably be no resolution to this for months and months. Very disappointed.
person Anon
schedule January 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I apologize for leaving the wrong review on your story! It was for another story I am reading not this one.

I really like this story and will wait patiently for you to update it because I know that no matter how long it takes it is always worth the wait.
person Jessie
schedule January 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I was so glad when Elliot told Novak off and happy for Lonny that his brother stood up for him. I did feel bad when they sent him to his bedroom like a child. The police used him as a mole and now Novak and even Elliot think he's too young to hear the truth? Great chapter and I hope Lonny won't be in any danger if he has to testify in court.
person Jayden
schedule January 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I am getting spoiled by all the recent updates you've been giving us! Please keep them coming! I hope Elliot support Lonny and doesn't get angry with him because that might make Lonny run away and get into even more trouble.
person Kat
schedule January 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Uwah, I somehow completely didn't realize you wrote another story before I coincidentally gave this one a shot today! I love London already and why is Novak so aweful to him? And Elliot! Please update soon!
person miles
schedule January 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Novak is very mysterious about his motive.
Is he going to take care of London ? Like a tuteur or something ?
Can't wait for more !! :)