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June 12, 2016 at 12:00 AM
You're using a rather common trope, but you are executing it well so far. I noted a few odd sentence structures--primarily adding unnecessary prepositions in some phrases. I look forward to reading more of this story.
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May 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story; but It's a shame you haven't updated in such a long time.
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March 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Really awesome so far!!! Plz update soon
Rukia
Rukia
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July 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
you have to update again soon It's been almost a year
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November 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i hope there's more chapters
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October 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
What a brilliant story. I really hope you won't abandon it! Is there a mailing list to get notified when the next chapter comes out?
Would greatly appreciate that! :3 Love your style of writing!
Would greatly appreciate that! :3 Love your style of writing!
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September 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
awww…please update soon, this is a fantastic story!
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September 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Really interesting! Please update
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August 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much! The first chapter is fabulous - and the length is spoiling me...
portraying both sides -the human pov and alien one- is very clever and i like it slot.
Hopefully you'll update soon! :)
portraying both sides -the human pov and alien one- is very clever and i like it slot.
Hopefully you'll update soon! :)
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August 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story! My curiosity is piqued. Hope to see updates soon