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for A Passing of Seasons

by HappyHarvests

person Katniss Everdeen
schedule March 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Shit, I meant Kore not Deyja, LOL.
person lildevl
schedule February 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
It will be a little easier going through this heart-breaking chapters knowing, and hoping, things will get better and it will all end well for my favorite couple, with maybe a baby or two to tie up the deal!! Love this exceptional story.
person dazedandconfused
schedule February 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh no, poor Kore and Deyja, and shame on Kore's father and Heill!!!!! I am so angry at them for what they are doing and it can only end with someone getting hurt. I am going to have a good cry now because I feel so bad about them being pulled apart. It's almost like Romeo and Juilet, and we know how badly that ended!
person Fghhh
schedule February 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Aw that chapter sure was sad /wipes tears
person Jayden
schedule February 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh, darn it, this was too upsetting and I needed a box of tissues because I couldn't stop crying and my nose was running too. I hope this story has mpreg like another reviewer mentioned because I think a newborn baby could help ease tension on all sides.
person Anon
schedule February 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
god I hope you update I have to know what happens next.
person reader
schedule February 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I cried reading the last of this. Can't wait for the next chapter.
person willynilly
schedule February 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
My heart is breaking for Kore and Deyja....absolutely love, love, love this story to pieces. I wonder if a baby would bring everyone back together???
person CelticThunderFan
schedule February 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Well, I had a bad feeling something like this might happen. I was beginning to like Cilus but now am upset with him again. I am worried about Deyja going to battle with his heart broken and even more concerned for what Kore might do. I wish Kore's mother would arrive in the camp because Kore needs her and I think she might be able to calm her husband down. I have to admit that I found myself shedding tears by the time I was done reading this chapter.
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule February 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I understand Heill's reasoning behind what he did but that doesn't make it right. This part just broke my heart, “You could have done me a favor and murdered me in the bailey yard all those years ago. You could have spared me some of this anguish. Ah, but then I would have no use for you and that is all that matters, isn’t it?” I wanted to reach in to story and hug Deyja. I have faith that things will work out but not before there is tons of angst.

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