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for A Passing of Seasons

by HappyHarvests

schedule March 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
As much as I would love for Kore and Deyja to run away together, I fell like that is not the answer to their problems. Once the war is over, they should stand up for themselves and defend their marriage. Kore specifically should take a stand against his father. He is not helpless and he is pretty darn smart. He also has Deyja to back him up.
person snowleopard
schedule March 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I just left a review and then it disappeared, very frustrating.

Oh, a very good chapter! It is wonderful to see Deyja and Kore back together and happy again. I hope they both stand up to Kore's father and confront him together because together they are stronger. I think Kore's father will see how happy and content his son is with Deyja and that would make him happy too.
person CelticThunderFan
schedule March 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I don't think Deyja and Kore are going to get out of this totally unscathed because once Cilus finds out what his son did there will probably be another battle but of a different kind. Oh, I loved this chapter because they got to spend a lot of time in bed making beautiful love together. I love the endearments they say to each other too. Um, what happened to Deyja's mare? I hope Kore made sure she was somewhere safe and out of harms way. If she is killed, I don't think Deyja will be too happy with Kore.

I would love to follow you on Tumblr and there is another author here that I follow who uses it. We get to ask tons of questions about the story and other topics BUT not spoilers even though we all try to get her to sneak some out, LOL.
person Jayden
schedule March 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I was really worried that something bad would happen to Kore like he would have been taken prisoner by the enemy so am very happy he is in Deyja's arms safe and snug. Now, how is Kore going to get back to the camp before his dad or Deyja's brothers discover he is there with them? I love Deyja and Kore's lovemaking/romance scenes.
person Nbsiren
schedule March 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I hope it stays well for them...though I can see them having some more problems before it works out
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule March 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I am so relieved that Kore made it safely into Deyja's arms. I was worried he might be shot or cut down. Alright, that didn't happen and I can rest easy now. We still have to worry about Kore's father but though.

Oh, I think a tumblr page is a real good idea!
person Jayden
schedule March 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I am so angry right now with Deyja's brothers and how much they have hurt him by their actions. I think Deyja is very vulnerable right now and I dread to think what could happen to him when they go into battle. I miss my Deyja and Kore being happy because when they are not happy I am not happy ~~~~ sobs ~~~~
person Nbsiren
schedule March 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
You had me sniffling with this chapter
person jusme
schedule March 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I am amazed this is your only story because of how well written it is, you seem like a pro at writing. Please never stop writing, your story is awesome.
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule March 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit this chapter still had me bawling like a baby. I really have learned to love Fyria, as well as admire and respect her too. I hope Deyja isn't going to do anything stupid that will land him in danger. I hope he ends up pregnant and then perhaps his father would change his way of thinking once he learned he would be a Grandfather.