rate_review Reviews

This story is AMAZING! The writing is brilliant and detailed. Your words flow together and I can feel the character's emotions as if they were my own. Seriously so great I can't get enough of this. Keep up the great work!!

OMG! What a very exciting new chapter! How can a father do something like that to their child?! I am so worried about what is going to happen now that the enemy is approaching. If only Deyja and Kore had left sooner! I am so scared for them!

Great chapter! I like that Kore is actually taking matters in his own hands for once and hope that Deyja comes around but he seems kind of upset with Kore right now. I hate seeing them both hurting this much.

I am off to check your new tumblr page!

Did you know there are two tumblr pages listed, one under your profile page which is different than the one you listed in this chapter. I still can't find where to ask or post questions/comments.

Hi Katniss. The ask.comment box should be available on the main page, in the side bar to the left of the screen (right under the warning blurb). I can see it on my computer, but let me know if you still can't see it; I may have to change the page layout.

Thanks! I will check it out tomorrow am hitting the sack now had a busy and crazy day!

good chapter, can't wait to see how they can be together without looking over their shoulders^^

I don't think running away to start a new life elsewhere is going to help them. Deyja and Kore need to make a stand against these bullies!!! If they do try and it doesn't work, then they can leave them all to rot and say good riddance!

Super story, loving this very much.

I really want to smash a hard object on Heill and Myrr's heads to knock some sense into them. I really don't like them at all. How can they treat their brother that way. I did love seeing Deyja standing up to them though and was cheering him on. I hope Byart can keep Kore safe and they get back safely.

I checked out your new tumblr page, it's awesome, but can you allow for non members to ask questions/comments. There is another author here that I follow who has it too but you don't have to be a member. If not, that's alright I will still keep checking it out but since I don't have a tumblr account so can't follow you on it but still read the posts.