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Fascinating story, will definitely be waiting for more. Liking the characters and feel of the story already.

Thanks for updating so fast! I am really enjoying reading this story. I feel bad for Kore being so frightened of Deyja and am actually surprised by it since he is the son of a village chieftain and is expected to take over one day for his father. I think his father would probably be ashamed of his behavior and punish him for it. I am curious to know what's going on now at Kore's village and how his parents are taking the news of his disappearance.

I am relieved you enabled this story to allow anonymous reviews because I couldn't leave one the first time you posted it. I really like Deyja and hope that eventually Kore will stop being stubborn and afraid so he can learn to trust him. I wonder if Kore's father will come looking for him or just assume he's dead. Update soon!

Great start! I love the character development as well as your style. Hopin to read more soon, thanks.

Wow, that was a great start. I can't wait to read more.

very nice

Hello!!

I was creeping on your story right before I was about to post a chapter on mine and wanted to leave a quick review! I love your word choice and details, especially during the scene where they're riding through the forest and of course the scene at the end. I'm still in a Game of Thrones mood thanks to that show and I have a feeling your story is going to be a great alternative. I'm looking forward to seeing more!!

Sweet Surrender