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for A Passing of Seasons

by HappyHarvests

person jusme
schedule September 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
A good one....have to follow.
person moon1958
schedule September 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Darn! Didn't get to see Kore and Deyja have their love scene! Actually, will the war brewing in the East come to Deyja's land? Thanks for the new chapter!
person Paulina
schedule September 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story! I was so disappointed to find that I'd read everything you have up so far :P Please update when you can!!
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule September 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh, I felt for sure Deyja and Kore's first time together was going to happen! I am really happy though that you are not having them jump right into the sack and like how they are 'exploring' and testing each other's limits. I wonder what kind of news Lady Fyria has brought for Deyja and bet it can't be good. I hope Deyja gets the fountain in the garden working and wonder if that has to do with anything.
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule September 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I meant I hope Kore gets the fountain in the garden working again.... not Deyja, LOL. He's too busy doing other important work in his study.
person Anon
schedule September 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Loved it!!!!!!!!! I love the tension between them now it's just like "oh kiss already".Kore is just adorable and I can't wait to read the rest of the story.
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule September 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for updating! I am watching my Patriots get the shit beat out of them and it's depressing so sorry this is short. I enjoyed Deyja's and Kore's kiss!
person moon1958
schedule August 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I really like this story! Cute little Kore and serious and dour Lord Deyja will make a pretty good couple. Hope you let us know why the curse exists pretty soon and whether Kore and Deyja can lift it. Will Kore's family try to rescue him? Anyways, thanks for sharing!
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule August 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am watching Football so this is going to be short, sorry, I love my Patriots!

I loved how Deyja was teasing Kore and got him to blush just like the little virgin he is, LOL. Sweet. Poor Kore doesn't understand these new feelings and it's confusing him. I hope Mrs. Martzia explains things to him.

Gotta go, there is a game to be watched!

Have a nice weekend and thanks for updating!
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule August 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, thanks so much for the fast update!

I really love the atmosphere and mood with this story. I can actually picture it in my mind and it's like I am walking through it along with Kore and Deyja. I am wondering now too about Byart and think he might have hidden feelings for Kore.

I still have a nagging feeling it's Kore's father causing Deyja's brothers the matter they are experiencing that they won't tell Deyja about.

Oh, sweet, we are getting to the delicious stuff soon, I think if Kore's little wank is anything to go by, LOL.

I love this and can't wait to see how it all unfolds.