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the relationship between Kore and Dej is so cute. Thanks for the update!

Great story and sorry I've never reviewed before don't know how I missed this but will try and be more careful in the future. Oh, have you ever thought of signing up in the forum section of AFF to promote this story and introduce people to it that way.

Hello there! Just dropping a review, proving that you've got a huge fan of this story in me. So don't stop writing! :) I wanted to let you know that I've been following this story since the very beginning, I just don't review much unless I really have something to say. But I love, love, love it! It's very well written and keeps me coming back for more every single chapter. I get excited every time I see a new chapter update. It's one of my absolute favorite originals that I've come across thus far. I'm really interested in what happens when Kore is reunited with his family after all this time away. And the rate that you're developing Kore and Deyja's relationship, perfect! Well, for me at least. :P Not too fast, not too slow. Good stuff. I can't wait to continue reading. Thanks for being an awesome author. C;

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!! CONTINUE THIS STORY! YOU HAVE FANS REALLY YOU DO! I just didn't know you add more chapters the last one I got to read I think was chapter 3... I just now got caught up and I'm totally LOVE what you've written so far and I can't wait to read what happens! read ya laters????

Great chapter and thanks for updating. I really do love this story but will admit when an author doesn't update regularly I tend to lose track of it unless I bookmark it. I think it's an unfair assumption to penalize those reading it by holding it
hostage due to what you believe is lack of reviews because it's not true. You have 32 reviews and 157 votes to-date so be happy with that because I am sure the numbers will go up although probably not as fast as you would like them to. Be patient and also thankful to those who actually take the time to hit that review/rating button. Please don't stop writing or get discouraged because you have a great talent. I am sorry you feel that way and hope you change your mind. Please take time yourself to read and review/rate other authors stories here on AFF too and give them your support.

I hope for an update soon. This is just to great a story to not finish. I love the allusions to the Greek mythology of Hades and Persephone; Deyja's older brothers are also allusions to Zeus and Poseidon to a T. I also love the slow delopment in Deyja and Kore's relationship.

Please, please, PLEASE gift us an update. No good original fiction should go to waste. It makes me sad. :(

Awesome story, plans for updates?

Appreciate the very nice and long update, loving this.

This has been a great read! I love the back and forth.


My one wish is that the whipping from the beginning of the story will be addressed again. Kore had been struck enough to draw blood, all over his back, and I find it hard to believe he wouldn't factor that into how much he trusted Deyja with touching him. And Kore seems prideful, (of course he's your character, so I am certainly transposing my own thoughts on this) and I think he would still carry resentment in some way... him wanting at least some groveling from Deyja before giving in.


With these Master/Ward stories, I do have to say...there's the usual punishment scene and it rubs me the wrong way when it's forgotten so easily, especially when the person who caused the harm then wants to be intimate, taking pleasure from skin he abused, yada, yada.
Uhmm...just wanted to reiterate that I am really enjoying this story! The criticism is more about something that's been bugging me in general about Master/Ward fics.

PS hopefully my html worked out, haha.

Love! Please keep writing! :)