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Wait no!What am I saying!!!I was halfway through the last chapter when I made thr smutty comment!I haven't realized you had left your chapter in such a cruel cliffhanger!No matter how much I desire a night of them rough tumbling in bed,this matter simply can't be left unattended!!!

Now I'm worried if anyone is going to believe him....I reaaaaaally reaaaalllly hope so...Those idiot brothers have such a low regards of Kore...

I am really hooked on Kore and Deyja's story. I am a big fan of fantasy too.

That was AWESOME! WHAT A CLIFFY TO BOOT TOO! read ya laters!

What a wonderful plot twist/cliff hanger way to end a chapter and what will happen when Deyja tells his brothers that Kore is possibly a child of the golden race and what will be their reaction. Will Deyja take Kore home now that they know where he lives and will Kore's father help Deyja and his people......

I really enjoy reading your story. I usually get bored with the rest of the plot after the characters finally get together but not in this case. I really like the way the story developed and can't wait to see the rest of it. And I would really love to see some interactions between Kore and Deyja's family. Since their are so convinced that he is not worth their brother... he should prove them wrong^^.

I just realized it's been a while since I left a review on this story. Not that I really have much to say on most stories I read. It's hard to gather my thoughts beyond "This story is really good" most of the time. xD

Buuuut seeing as it's been a while since I left a review (first was on chapter 3 in response to what myth this was based off of, and then chapter 4 in response to you again, I think), I figured I should go ahead and let you know I'm still reading, though I did fall several chapters behind for a while, but I'm all caught up now~

I really like how the story/tensions are developing in the background. We don't have a lot of clues as to exactly what is going on, but there's enough and it's getting quite good. And Kore and Deyja's relationship is getting much deeper, and that's really enjoyable. Can't wait for your next update, whenever it is. (Take your time if you need to~ I know not everyone's patient, but I can wait if I have to~)

Love your story and am looking forward to more^^

I am very curious as to learning more about Mrs. Martzia's mysterious son, very curious! Oh, this was well worth waiting for and did not disappoint. I love hot smut between two men like Kore and Deyja, yummy! Great chapter and thanks for updating, I really am enjoying reading this story. Enjoy the rest of your weekend, Katie.

Great chapter! Thanks for updating, I liked it.

Oh, what a good chapter and they finally hit the sack, LOL. I wonder if Deyja will ever find out who took Kore's virginity and that his father had abused him.