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Wow, this is really starting to get very exciting!

Love the new chapter! So exciting. can't wait to see what new lands they pass through next!

I can't wait for them to reach the desert land and get help from their uncle for Deyja! I hope Kore will be there too but if not that he and Fyria, Mrs. Martzia and the rest of their entourage are safe and not in danger!

Great chapter! I am really getting worried about what's going to happen and hope that they will all be safe. Please don't let Deyja die!

Very good chapter! I am so sorry for the loss of your loved one and hope you find healing and peace soon.

I am worried about Deyja and wish Kore was with him because then he could heal him!

Oh dear, I am really sorry to hear the sad news about your family member, please take care of yourself.

I am worried about what's going to happen next and feel like something big is on the horizon. I am very concerned over Deyja's wounds. I love how detailed and long each chapter is that you write. You are very talented and this story deserves to be published one day.

I wasn't expecting another update this fast and it was a nice surprise. I hope you are coping better and that writing helps you heal. I enjoyed reading how Kore and Fyria seem to be forming a new bond of their own of sorts during their exodus. I was worried about Mrs. Martzia and was relieved when Kore found her again although it was sad learning about her earlier days and the story behind what happened to her beloved son. I hope Heill and Myrr can get Deyja the help he needs before he gets worse with their Uncle Tyre. I wonder where that other trail leads to. Is it possible that Kore's land is that way too?

The story keeps getting more exciting. So sad that Deyja and Kore have to separate but maybe Kore will discover more information about his home and family in the meantime. The idea of the people in the city all being under siege is quite scary. I am really looking forward to the next fabulous chapter.

Sorry to hear about the passing of your family member.

I am sorry for your loss and please accept my deepest condolences.

I hope Kore will be alright with Fyria and nothing bad happens. I am so excited and happy for you that this story is getting published, how awesome!

Please take you time to deal with your grief, we will still be here.