AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for A Passing of Seasons

by HappyHarvests

person Jayden
schedule January 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really appreciate the effort you put into writing these long chapters. I enjoyed this one very much especially seeing the battle of emotions both Deyja and Kore were facing but now that they have confessed their love to one another and are committed to getting married I am worried something will mess them up.
person anon
schedule January 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWW!! ADORABLE!! This chapter fits very well with your penname (happy harvests). It was so sweet.
person Nbsiren
schedule January 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
squee :) A touch of romance^^
person dazedandconfused
schedule January 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Very good chapter filled with romance, angst, comedy, hot smut but most of all Deyja and Kore are engaged to be married!!!!!! I am so happy for them but it probably can't happen until they all have won the War. I was wondering will Deyja ask for Kore's hand in marriage once he meets his parents even though he's already asked him? Oh, and I love the ring Deyja had made for Kore it was so romantic!
person snowleopard
schedule January 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I love this chapter! It showed a new side to Deyja and also Kore. I really loved it!
person kylee
schedule January 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the new chapter. I really love seeing Kore and Deyja reunited. Poor Deyja is in trouble now. He made a full confession but he did not explain himself fully to Kore. I hope Kore will understand and forgive Deyja soon enough. Maybe he will see that Deyja must love him if he is willing to confess instead of keeping his knowledge secret. I am eager to see how Deyaj will get himself back into Kore's good graces.


person Katniss Everdeen
schedule January 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I hope Kore can forgive Deyja for not telling him! Why is it so difficult for Deyja to admit he loves Kore to his brother and he has his uncle's blessing so why won't he marry him?!!! Great chapter!
person arweneveningstar
schedule January 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Very good chapter! I enjoyed it.
person Jayden
schedule January 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I hope Deyja and Kore make up before Deyja takes Kore back to his homeland. Deyja's family is starting to grow on me and I feel like I am getting to know and understand them all better than I did in the beginning.
person kylee
schedule January 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Such suspenseful chapter 16.Great writing. Deyha almost ran out of luck.I am glad that Kore managed to save him. I can't imagine how they will manage to overcome the Tekanites. After the story about the swordfight between Deyja and Heill as children, I am surprised that Deyja even speaks to Heill anymore.