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for A Passing of Seasons

by HappyHarvests

schedule February 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Well I'm beyond pissed off at Heil and Cilus. Frankly, I was hoping Kore would explode with rage and magic or something but instead he just took a ton of blows to the heart. It hurt to read this. I know Cilus is being a pain in the butt because he is afraid of losing his son again, but how can he not realize that what he is doing now will make him lose his son? It's so sad! I'm glad the Deyja told off Heil, instead of defending his brother marriage he made out to be nothing. I bet Heil regrets everything now. At this point I hope there's mpreg just so Kore will have no choice but to be with Deyja. I'm sure Cilus wouldn't want his son having a baby out of wedlock. This chapter was exciting to read but everything that happened was just depressing.
person Jayden
schedule February 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I certainly didn't expect a family reunion this soon and wonder how it will change the outcome of the war.
person orion
schedule February 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this tale you weave.....
person dazedandconfused
schedule February 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I am not feeling to good so that's why this review is short but thanks for the update. I am happy that Kore has found his father. I enjoyed this chapter very much.
schedule February 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I knew this was gonna happened. But it was still such a shock. I can't wait to see how Deyja handles his new father in all. Kore is gonna need to protect his new hubby. xD
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule February 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Happy Valentine's Day!

I never expected Kore's father to come riding into their camp, what a surprising twist! Now, I am worried what Heill is thinking of thrusting upon Deyja for the needs of the war. I am stressing out worrying now about how Cilus not taking it well that his son is bonded with another male and who he is.
person Nbsiren
schedule February 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
nothing like a little family reunion in the midst of war to be a possible game changer :P
person dazedandconfused
schedule February 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I thought the part with Kore seeing his wedding 'dress' was so funny and the way he modeled it for Deyja was hilarious. I really loved their bonding ceremony. I wish Kore would tell Dyja about his father so he will be prepared for when they first meet each other. Super chapter!
person Nbsiren
schedule February 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
good chapter^^
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule January 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love reading long chapters like this. I am concerned about what will happen when Kore and Deyja eventually travel to Kore's home and have to face his parents and village. I don't think Kore's father will be very accepting of them being a couple but do think Kore's mother will love Deyja as a son-in-law.