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for Coming Armed

by benny_grl

schedule July 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying this story so far! You've got humor, intrigue, and drugs! lol

There is a completed story on here that also dealt with a similar drug like Fantasy. In this story, it was called Heat, and the same thing happened; the people who took it became insatiable and didn't care who they were screwing as long as they screwed someone. lol I think the effects wore off after they would finally pass out. The drug is much more potent than Viagra! lol
schedule July 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hey benny - I thought I would click on your profile to read about your other story you have up and that's when I saw the name Zane! lol I forgot to mention that in the second chapter you also wrote Zane instead of Alec. You did that in the first chapter also...just in case you wanted to go back and fix it. =)
person RJaneyP
schedule July 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Exciting sexy start, keep going babe! G
schedule July 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was an exciting first chapter! I was sitting at the edge of my seat. In fact my dog kept barking b/c she wants to go out but I couldn't turn my eyes away from this story.

It's a really good, well-written chapter. I'm looking forward to the next one. Oh, just to mention, a few paragraphs towards the end, you wrote 'Zane' picked up an article of clothing from the floor but I think you mean 'Alec'. :)