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by 2rainsong2

schedule July 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Good luck again, Rain, with your finding a job and your move. =)

I liked learning that Brandon wasn't born a rich, spoiled kid. He worked hard for what he has. That, or he screwed his way to the top. lol

So now I'm really curious as to who the third guy is. Could it be Felix? He was way too easy I thought. But I don't know him, so I shouldn't judge.

Love Travis - every gay boy needs a Travis as their bff. :)
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule July 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I didn't think Tristan suffered from low self esteem but guess I don't know him well enough yet. I wonder who the third party will turn out to be and thought it might be Felix but then I thought about it and decided Tristan would have met them first not Brandon. I was a little confused by this part of summary; His self esteem lacking he does the only thing he thinks he can. He gets them to fall for each other. Well, they better love him too and not leave him out as a third wheel!!! Who does he fall for first? Brandon or this as yet unknown lover? Will they hate or be jealous of each other? Will they both be dominate lovers? Good luck with your job search and move!
person CelticThunderFan
schedule July 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I wasn't expecting another update this soon but it was a pleasant surprise so thank you. So, we are learning there is more to Brandon than meets the eye. I felt really bad for Brandon learning about his youth. I hope Brandon doesn't push Tristan before he is ready and he better not hurt him or he will have Mia to deal with, LOL.

I hope you get some interviews in your job search and best of luck with moving.

Later, Katie.
person Jessie
schedule July 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Waves to Rain,

I was so happy to find while scrolling down the list of latest updates that you had already posted first chapter of yet another new story. To say I was ecstatic is sort of fibbing it was more like I had an orgasm and my toes actually curled when I saw your name under the tile of story, LOL. You know I am just kidding but any story you write gets me that excited because I know it's going to be that great!

Tristan is a very interesting new character and I am already in love with him. Brandon seems different from the other Dom's you write about too. Mia is a darling and I hope we see more of her in story and that she approves of Tristan's lifestyle because I think it would hurt him if she doesn't.
person RJaneyP
schedule July 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Normally, I like supernatural/sci-fi/magical fantasy in the stories I read, but you manage to make the realistic very sexy and exciting.
Good luck with getting that story published it deserves it. One of my reviews to your pre-published story got deleted, but after the fact it really wasn't that important... just me wishing you well etc. I didn't back to you because to you,sooner because my old computer was having one of it every three month tantrums and tizzy-fits, which I needed to overcome.
I Really look forward to reading more of this one. Sound like the Kid, should beware of his big bad predatory sharky, boss... or not! LOL Gslinger
person dazedandconfused
schedule July 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am still unsure of Brandon and his intentions towards Tristan. I am glad Tristan is keeping him at bay for the time being too but don't know how much longer he can hold off himself. Good luck with your job search and moving. I got stung by a yellow jacket today while mowing the lawn and man did it hurt. I guess I am lucky it stung me through my jeans and not on my bare flesh. Thanks for updating again so fast!
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule July 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my lord, Rain, you are back! I mean not that you have been gone for that long to begin with but I wasn't expecting to find a new story this soon until after Honky Tonk got published.

I love Mia so much and you have written her character to perfection. Tristan and Brandon are very interesting and complex characters. I am itching to find out who the third guy will be in their threesome little love match.

I am so excited about reading more of this new story of yours!

Welcome back!

Oh, oh, oh, I am your first reviewer too!

schedule July 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Rain, your baaaaack!

Good luck with Honky Tonk getting published and keep us posted.

I think you have another gem on your hands with this new story. After learning of Tristan's background, I wanted to cry but on the good side he did get to live with Mia who has been a great influence on him.

I am not sure yet about Brandon yet and am afraid he's after another trophy to get into his bed and wants to add another notch to his bedpost.

Is Tristan a virgin? I am thinking not.

Glad your back, Katie.
person TRUgrit
schedule July 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
AAGGHHH! So fucking excited for your new story! A threesome?? How licentious! Keep us posted on the responses that you get. That's so exciting for you and I wish you all the best! I love how Tristan sees his new place. He's so freakin cute! Can't wait for more!!
person dazedandconfused
schedule July 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh, your back Rain!!!!!!! I am so super excited now and also happy for the good news about Honky Tonk!

I was intrigued by the story summary when I read it and then when I saw threesome I like squealed with happiness. I think Tristan is a doll but don't want Brandon to hurt him by just using him. I hope you introduce the third party soon but guess you can't rush it because Tristan and Brandon haven't even got to first base yet, LOL.