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by 2rainsong2

person dazedandconfused
schedule July 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Awe Rain, please don't get disappointed about not getting an offer on Honkey Tonk getting published yet. I am sure it's on the horizon. On the bright side, you did get that job you applied for! Gabe is lucky Clarence didn't shoot him in the butt with buckshots, LOL. I think one day the old geezer is going to accept Gabe's offer but is holding off because he enjoys catching him on his property and they have playful banter back and forth. I wonder how many young men Gabe has taken to his secret place or is Tristan the first?

Oh, on a side note, don't get disappointed by lack of reviews lately because I think there are not as many readers here anymore and they have wandered off to other sites. Did you ever check out a03 or consider weebly dot com or live journal or tumblr to update stories on in addition to AFF?
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule July 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am not mad at Brandon but kind of upset with Tristan and how he is acting with Gabe. Thanks for another fast update, you rock! Oh, and I am still keeping my fingers crossed that you get published and become a famous author!
person miles
schedule July 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Poor Gabe ! I hope Tristan is not going to break up !
Obviously Tristan has some issues. Well he had a bad childhood and is afraid of bond...
Brandon is good for him too and hot ! Can't wait for more ! :)
Book 2 sounds promising...
schedule July 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
"Coastal Cowboys", that is such a cool title, Rain! :) I can't wait to read it!


Well, I finally caught up with these two chapters! I was sorta shocked that Tristan was the one who kissed Brandon first. lol I feel badly for Gabe b/c Gabe is thinking that he really screwed up with Tristan. Tristan just took off b/c he feels something for Gabe and he doesn't want to, and that money thing still bothers him. But just imagine how free he would feel if he told Gabe the truth about him.

Oh, and stealing from the convenience store you go to every day is just not cool. lol The last thing he needs is to wind up in jail. ;)
person CelticThunderFan
schedule July 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love the new title of book 2, Coastal Cowboys!

I know Tristan has had a tough childhood but he has been give a chance to straighten his life around which is more than some street kids get. I don't think it was right he stole from the store he frequents and he still might get caught so shouldn't be too cocky about getting away with stealing candy. He's an adult not a young child with no supervision.

I also am getting the urge to slap Tristan for how he's making Gabe feel.

Brandon is sexy.
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule July 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow Rain, I am so very happy for you that you got the job and hope it works out for you but the publishers don't know what they are doing by not picking up Honkey Tonk. Oh, if you don't get it published right away, will you give us closure and an epilogue chapter with Hunter and Ethan in New York!

I missed Brandon in this chapter and hope he starts putting pressure on Tristan. I have an inkling that Hunter will get Clarence to finally cave in and sell the place to him then Gabe, Brandon and Tristan can move in together.


person dazedandconfused
schedule July 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, I can't wait until they go out on their date and thought wouldn't it be slightly hilarious or rather awkward if Brandon showed up while they were on it. I like what Lisa mentioned about Brandon and Gabe possibly knowing each other that would be very freaky for Tristan, LOL.

Oh, you should check out this story (along with all his other ones) written by the talented Laevi called, Just for Play. I think you will like it.
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule July 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am really excited over Tristan's and Gabe's upcoming date. I wonder if Tristan will act on his feelings towards Brandon now that he is with Gabe because wouldn't it be like cheating? Update soon, I love this and can't wait to find out whether or not Gabe and Brandon know each other already.
person CelticThunderFan
schedule July 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well, Brandon took that better than I thought he would. I liked how he held Tristan's chin and 'examined' him with his eyes noticing the bite marks and knowing what he had done. I wonder if Brandon's going to show up at the gym where Tristan works and will he run into Gabe or does he already know him. I hope their date goes well but it would add fuel to the fire if Brandon interrupted their little private interlude.
person dazedandconfused
schedule July 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I wonder what Brandon's going to think when he finds out Gabe got to taste Tristan before he did and bet he's going to be mad. I really like Gabe and will probably learn to like Brandon eventually too. Tristan seems demure but he's definitely not shy, LOL.

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