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by 2rainsong2

schedule November 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story. It has wonderful depth and interesting characters I cared about. I look forward to reading the next one!
schedule November 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
wohoo~ beautifully written. love the characters and how everything fell together.
person lightdestiny8000
schedule September 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOooo HOW CAN YOU LEAVE IT THERE!?!?!?!?!? OMG OMG NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO I love all of your stories though and have read through them many times. I cannot wait to see if you keep going with this, even if it is only as one-shots. (Please write more?) I'll send cookies if you do! Keep up the great writing and I hope you get published! I would love to help support a great writer.
person Lisa
schedule September 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh Rain! You had me going with Trent-killing-Peggy-thingy! lol And B&G covering it up - that was too funny! :) Thank God it was just a nightmare.

So...Sabrina and Trent - I think it's great. And of course Brandon was right; Gabe would have reacted the same way with any guy who was interested in his mother. He's so sweet. :)

And the gifts at Xmas at the home had me all choked up.

Ok now Rain - you 'dug yourself into a hole' and now you must deliver!!! FOURSOME, FOURSOME, FOURSOME, heheh, shall I go on? We want Hot Cop to join in their three-way! :) Ya gotta do a sequel now, girl! :)
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule September 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Rain, you really had me going there and I believed Trent did kill Peggy then they were going to bury her body BUT it was all a dream. You are a very naughty author. That's a testament to your writing and that little evil creature perched on your shoulder whispering bad things in your ears, lol. Please write at least a long one-shot featuring a foursome with the hunky Officer Burroughs.
person miles
schedule September 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Haha ! You dared !! It was a dream. Not a murder. :))
Cool ! I didn't want for Trent to return in prison...
Humm, sexy cop has a partner... They're very naughty and I can imagine the reaction of their family ! lol
Thank you for this great, hot piece. Take care.
:)
person CelticThunderFan
schedule September 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe you have finished yet another story! Thank you!

Oh my gosh, it was all a dream! You had me fooled! I thought Trent really knocked off that bitch Peggy! Tristan's dream reminded me of that classic moment in Dallas when Pam opened the shower curtain and there was Bobby taking a shower and the whole season had been a dream, LOL. You deserve an Oscar for coming up with this!

I am happy for Trent finding happiness with Sabrina but understand what Gabe was feeling too.

I will be watching out for more new stories from you but in the meantime am hooked on Honky Tonk 2!

Oh, and I would love seeing how they manage a foursome with that sexy State Police Officer! Yep! Handcuffs would be cool too.

Later, Katie.


person dazedandconfused
schedule September 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You've got to be kidding me! A freaking dream, for real? Ha ha, good one, Rain, you got me! I am glad it turned out that way though because I would have hated seeing Trent go back to jail and it would have destroyed Tristan for sure. I hope you write more of these guys with the new officer thrown in. Thanks!!!!!
person miles
schedule September 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh nooo ! What's happened ? Please, tell me Trent didn't do that !
Must be a mistake or self-defence or something ! Poor Tristan... To find his parents like that... :(
schedule September 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Holy hell, Rain! lol

I can definitely see why Trent would want to butcher the bitch, but not on their beautiful carpet!!!!! Damn, they're gonna need to change it now. lol

I wanna say good for Trent, but now he's gonna wind up back in the big house and he'll never come out. Tristan will be heartbroken - just when he got his father back, he's gonna lose him.