schedule
July 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
interesting beginning. just a little bit to short. more please:)
schedule
July 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Keep writting please i will like to know more about his ' Young Brother' i thought we were going to read something more about him other than the intro. But good job.!
schedule
July 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
WOW... nice start you might want to get a beta to help out with the writing if you want it to be english other wise you have a great start! read ya laters!!!