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September 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i really love your story . keep up the good work <3
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September 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Okay... I don't know if you did it on purpose or not but chapter 8 and 7 are combined?!? I think you might want to fix that. Also I just got caught up from chapter 5 to now. Don't worry people are still reading this even if they don't comment. I'll try to comment often so you know at least one person is reading! read ya laters!!!
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August 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
, thanks for new update , i like your story :)
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August 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I like this story and my only complaint are the chapters are way too short. I know you may be discouraged by what you think seem to be lack of reviews but all and all you are doing better then some other authors. Do you actually read and review here? If you would, maybe other others would review your story and give you pointers. Try promoting you story in the forum too. Good luck!
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August 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i really like the story , good job :)
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July 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
once again great story! I all most thought he was waking in the hospital.... Anywho I look forward to seeing where this goes! read ya laters!
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July 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
that was great! I really like how things are coming together with Seth and it seems real that he would envy D for his childhood, I look forward to seeing how this goes from here on out! read ya laters!!!
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July 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
More please!:-)
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July 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
WOW this is going to be a great story I'm hoping for a happy ending!!! read ya laters!
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July 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please continue.. it's very good writing :-)