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for Broken

by guilty_pleasure

schedule May 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
New reader here. :)
Finally, Dwyn now knows Seth's suffering. Thank god!

Can't wait to know what would happen next! :)
person wolfluv
schedule May 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
YES YES YES YES! Dwyn finally came to the rescue! thank you for updating! read ya laters!
person abyssdoor
schedule May 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I can't help but think this will go to court and people will defend the bastard because "he's such an upstanding citizen and Dwyn is an outsider, a stranger, and Seth is an "ungrateful" child"...
person dawn
schedule April 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
omg cant want for the next chapter.
love the story
person wolfluv
schedule February 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
WOW THAT WAS INTENSE! I hope that with Dwyn leaving Seth will make an effort to come clean or at least I hope Dwyn has sense enough to have a clue and really checks out either Seth himself or I hope he walks in on a Session with Mr Brent and Seth's dad. OR maybe he'll see a video with Seth and the awful things they are doing to him.... read ya laters!
person Mona Thompson
schedule January 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god!!!! This story is killing me!!! I couldn't put it down! You are doing an amazing job at helping your readers connect with the characters. I am so in love with this boy...my heart breaks for him:( I can't wait till he tells his "older brother" what his disgusting father has been doing to him all these years... now he is whoring him out to some nasty perv! Please please please post more soon! I gotta know how it turns out for this kid! I want to jump in there and rescue him! You are one hell of a writer!
person Mona Thompson
schedule January 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
So...this is just my opinion but I think you are doing a wonderful job considering English is not your first language. I have only read the first chapter and my heart is completely broken for this boy! I'm going to keep reading tonight because I'm very excited to see where this goes so please keep posting because I have to know how this is going to go! Thank you for the great entertainment!
person wolfluv
schedule January 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
DAMN! I hope that Seth doesn't do something terrible an tries to kill himself! I mean I would be afraid that they would just let him die and bury him! Does the maid not speak ? I hope that if he does try to off himself that he leaves a note and the maid call the hospital! read ya laters!
person wolfluv
schedule September 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
WOW I just got caught up to this chapter and I'm glad Seth has had some good moments compaired to the other times he's had in the past few years! I know whats coming for Seth though and it's going to SUCK BIG TIME I hope at least his party goes better then it goes with Mr Brent. read ya laters!
person Pummpie
schedule September 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really hope you continue with this story.... It's very compelling. I would love to know how it will end?