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for The Prince Bride.

by DerpityDerDerp

person Catmeow
schedule August 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That was such a cliffhanger!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter, I hope clarissa really doesn't die. All the little elf wanted was for Emily to love her. There is so much tense and mystery in the story now. This story is great especially all the guy on guy action. I haven't read a good story like this in a while and I'm craving more.
person Destiny
schedule August 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
At first, I was a little apprehensive in reading your story because I wasn't sure what to expect, but I am interested to read more now. I've really been enjoying~! XD
person Anon
schedule August 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love that we're getting the chance to better understand each husband and their kingdoms :) This chapter was really sweet- I already liked Zale but this made me like him more. Too cute!
person ryla
schedule July 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow! really really hot. I like them all and looking forward to more smexy times plus their daily life.
person TabFan
schedule July 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I agree with Monroe that Zale is now a stranger. Zale should've at least visited him on his birthdays! Which is why I'm against him. I'm for Rowan and Nicodemus. I like Henri, but think he should've had to marry 2 women, then Monroe would've only had to marry 2 men. I want Henri to have at least one child.
person Peach lips
schedule July 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story. It has been a while since I've read a good one like this. I beg that you keep updating as often as you do. As for a favorite of Prince Monroe's husbands I am biased towards Zale. He is just so lovely. I look forward to more chapters.
person beade
schedule July 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Interesting! I do hope that there is some conflict between the different men though. If I were put in that situation I know I probably might have some prejudices against the other men or even dislike them, but pretend to like them for the sake of the relationship. It'd be weird if they all just accepted each other.
person Gia
schedule July 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
The brother is a real jerk. He did not have to spring it on him in public or be such an ass to him.
person ela.
schedule July 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i like this story!
i wait the wedding night.

:-D
person Dekorx
schedule July 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story!