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for The Prince Bride.

by DerpityDerDerp

person YuuLim
schedule September 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
AHHH! I can't believe you just did that! Omigosh, that was a great update! Always appreciate me some loving. I'm not against the sequel, I just want fluffy times. If I can get them fluff, I'm fine with a little angst. I'm still in denial about Alston. That threw me. Didn't expect that plot twist. I thought the goddess was like the gods and goddesses in Greek myths. Athena turning the woman into a spider for her daring to say she was better at embroidery than the goddess herself. I had to convince myself that your goddess was just as jealous as them, and now? I have been porven right, you won't be that cruel! Keep up the great work! I'm loving your work and somewhat dreading the next curve ball you'll throw me! :)
person Seiba
schedule September 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHH a lot makes so much sense now. Is Alston still is love with the other three then? Or I'm kinda confused on that part. Alston was my least favorite so I rly don't mind him going.
person luna_yolly
schedule September 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Aaaahhhhh. Poor Monroe, I feel for him.

I wounder what the other think and how they react about Alston little revelation.
I am confused about something, is Monroe still in the wrong skin or is he in his real body? If he is in correct skin will he have problems with his vision and nightmares? These are just questions that were on my mind.

Anyway, as always great chapter!
Keep up the great work.

person luna_yolly
schedule September 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
YAY!

I love Nico. XD

Great chapter! Keep Up the great work!
Can't wait for the next one.
person Angel
schedule September 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Like... What world am I living in right now? So many shocking details revealed but I did enjoy it. But the question remains, do they all end up together? I can't wait for the next chapter!
person Jess
schedule September 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I am loving all these updates but then what am I going to do while your writing the sequel (please say you are writing the sequel).

I am shocked about Alston - you got me there! What about the first time he met him and they kissed? Was he under the spell then as well. I guess so but it's so sad.

Monroe can't seem to get a break. I wonder how the other husbands are going to react now that he no longer loves Monroe. Does he love his other husbands anyway?

Awesome story!
person Angel
schedule September 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! Nico recognized Monroe. I knew there was a reason I liked him! I'm so happy you updated this story. I don't particularly care if you make a sequel or just have little oneshots, just as long as we can see all 5 of them together again... Okay maybe a sequel... Your choice. Keep up the good work! :)
person Jess
schedule September 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Yay - another chapter! I want more but I don't want it to end. I'm so glad someone recognized him and he wasn't sent to his death or something. I miss Alston :/ I hope once he see's Monroe he at least speaks again.
person YuuLim
schedule September 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love your writing so much! Although it is sad that you'll be ending this soon, I'm glad that Monroe will finally have his happy ever after. Now, about the sequel, I feel that bridal toasts would be a better way of relating the events after. (I just want fluff after the angst. :)) A sequel would mean a lot more discord coming up and I'm not sure I could stand the wait for the HEA. You keep me in suspense with every chapter you post, keep up the good work! Poor Monroe, at least Nico could recognise him, even if no one else does. Hope everything gets cleared up soon!
person luna_yolly
schedule September 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Nooooo! Don't end it there. XD

You keep me in suspense with every end of a chapter. I always cant wait for the next one.
I love your writing and stories.
I hope you update soon. LOL