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OMGosh - it's almost over! Thank goodness there is a sequel coming (what am I going to do while you write it?). Very good chapter. I wonder whats going to happen when they all return to Alston and what is to become of this new man who finds Monroe attractive? Will we be seeing anymore of him? I hope so :) -- maybe he can have eyes for only Monroe and make a few husbands jealous (insert evil smile) lol.

You make me feel so much in such a short period of time! First I feel all the fuzzy warm feelings of having Monroe be loved by his husbands and also by the goddess that he had misunderstood for so long. I must say, you made the goddess pretty forgiving on that point. After all, Monroe has been slandering for a long time! Giving him a hug (somehow) was such a cute touch! The mentions of Alston not being Monroe's husband though... Every time I read about Monroe saying things like he only has 4 husbands, most of them get along... Just keeps tugging at my heartstrings, I'm all like, 'ow' on his behalf. I felt overwhelming sadness at the thought of this being complete. Where would I go for my reading fix? It's going to be hard to replace this, maybe never. As always, thank you for the wonderful updates and I look forward to the next chapter!

hell i love it when you have a lot of stuff going on XD last few chapters without sex distracting everyone, have been a blast! haha

So now Rowen favors Zale - Poor Monroe (someone needs to favor him if that's the case)!!! I would say it was great that he has a flirty buddy but he doesn't look like himself so how can he be sure this guy will like the real Monroe? It's not all about looks except, in Monroe's case that's a big part of him. He started working on his looks very early on because he decided that was what he had going for him. He thought he would be rejected by his husband the first time he changed bodies because of his looks. He really is blessed and cursed.

I hope you feel better soon!

All them feels right now. Poor Alston, poor Monroe. Everything's going haywire before getting rebuilt from the ground. What about the other hubbies though? Feels like the conflict is happening in their own bubble instead. I'm not sure they can work this knot out of their relationship now, but I don't want Alston/Monroe to die/leave. I don't know why I keep expecting Henri to drop dead soon. Before his baby arrives. That will devastate Monroe and his wife, but enable the rebuilding of a whole new whole for his child to rule over one day. Where peace will reign. :/
I like the Queen though, she sounds like a benevolent person, aren't Queens supposed to be just that? Some prefer the evil (but pretty) stepmother from snow white I guess?
Thank you for the update!

Great Chapter!

I can imagine Monroe and Alston having difficulties with the husband sharing thing. I can see them arguing about it, more Alston yelling at Monroe than the other way around. For me Alston seem to be the most selfish of them all. Do get me wrong, I like him it just that he gives me that impression. I feel that Monroe is the one that has lost and sacrificed the most.
It will be interesting to see what each husband think about this situation between Monroe and Alston.

As always, great chapter! I can't wait for the next chapter.
You always leave wanting more. XD
Keep up the great work.

I'm not to sure what to say here. In Bridal Toasts I figured it was Lyle's husband who dies in battle - you surprised me there. Very sad to read about the death even if I knew it was coming:/

How can they all have "the war is over" sex if two of them aren't lovers anymore? It's possible but seems unfulfilling to all involved. It's so sad. I love them all! It almost makes me want Zale to love only Monroe again -- almost. Okay maybe not - they're all to cute together. I just feel so awful for Monroe. He thinks he's on borrowed time with his husbands and that there is something wrong with him. Poor Monroe!

Oh I wouldn't expect you to change him, you can't please everyone with every character, that's unrealistic haha. I guess I'm just really not a fan of how weak a person he is and I feel like he really hasn't developed into anything, just kind of been that wimpy useless character. Not that it's a bad thing to be a weak person, but he just isn't my cup of tea in that respect. I feel even with as much time as he has had in the story he has just been a slug sitting there with no development. Even Rowan I enjoy more and he has been gone most of the story. Just personal opinion. :) IDK how it's gonna work with him and the rest now, going to be a bit awkward, guess I'll just have to see how you make it work out.

noooo!! Why Alston? Why? make him love monroe again