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by TRUgrit

person dazedandconfused
schedule July 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I forgot to ask this question and wanted to know. Wasn't there like a movie called True Grit with the great actor John Wayne? Is that were you got the idea for your author name? If it is, that's pretty cool!
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule July 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, I wasn't expecting an update this fast and am so happy!

Did Dylan ever find the missing present, the picture in the handmade glass frame, for Nathan?

Dylan seems to have a good life in the present but I wonder how Nathan is doing.

Please update again soon!
schedule July 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Didn't expect a new chapter so soon, but when I saw it, I just had to eat it up! Nathan was indeed a sweetheart to be able to hold off for so long and making their first kiss also a kiss goodbye. I'm anxious for them to meet again in present time.
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule July 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh, poor little Dylan! Thank goodness he has Nathan and the others on his team supporting him. I dislike his dad Daryl and his uncle. Please update soon!
person dazedandconfused
schedule July 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I just found this story of yours and think you are doing a great job writing it. I noticed it's your first story too, awesome, I love it already. I wanted to hug Dylan plus jump into the story and cheer him on then punch his ass-hole father and uncle in the face for being abusive towards Dylan. I am curious about the story summary too. What could Dylan have done that was so back and would require forgiveness from Nathan? I am assuming the story will jump to the present time and we will find all this out as story proceeds. UPDATE SOON!!!!!
schedule July 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I wonder just what Dylan did in order to want forgiveness. Nathan seems like a sweetheart. I really want to read more about these two!