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by TRUgrit

schedule July 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Heya TRU!

Good luck with your move! Working seven days this week! Holy crap! What do you do?

I will wait for however long it takes you to update. This story is way too good to put down. lol

Darryl is such an ass. I'm sure I've said it before and I know it won't be the last time. Brian Green (is that a shout-out to the Beverly Hills, 90210 Brian Austin Greene? lol), is a slimebag. Oh, I guess it's NOT a shout-out. hahah

What scum he is. Hey, he and Darryl and Riley should all live together in douchebag hell. ;)

I'm looking forward to the next chapter, however long it takes. Don't worry TRU, you deal with what you have to deal with and your loyal readers will wait. Well, at least I will. Good luck! :)
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule July 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am officially coming after Brian with my bow and arrows to shoot him right in his filthy 'expletive'!!!!!!!!!!! I will turn him from a rooster to a hen with one shot!!!!!!!!!! I love this movie called Nine to Five with Dolly Parton where she threatens to shoot her boss. It's hilarious (kind of corny but fun) and you should check it out sometime if you haven't seen it. I am dying to know what and who Ethan finds when he walks into Darryl's room.
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule July 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Dylan!!!! Ethan is in Honky Tonk by 2rainsong2, LOL.
schedule July 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Damn if that ass Riley didn't throw that bit about a brother in Dylan's face. Who the hell could it be? Never mind that, why the hell didn't he know about this before? Does his brother know about him? Shit. Is it true though? Maybe Riley's saying that just to get Dylan down there.

Another awesome chapter, TRUgirlraisedintexas. lol For a Texas girl you sure don't put a lot of country songs in the chapter. I think the only one you had was King George. My kids told me about Pandora the other day and wow! You wouldn't believe all these cool country songs that come up when you type in a song or an artist. It's so cool. :) Yeah, I know, I'm a dork. ;)

schedule July 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Dammit! I forgot all about Ven...

Did you fix your disclaimer yet, TRU? I don't want this hella awesome story deleted!!!!
person dazedandconfused
schedule July 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Um, Tru, you haven't fixed your disclaimer and the moderators are not kidding when they say your story will be hidden in 7 days then the next step is deletion of story. PLEASE FIX YOUR DISCLAIMER!!!!!!!!!! I would hate not to be able to read the rest of this awesome story. If you let this happen, I think you will have a lot of disappointed readers on your hands. I gotta run and catch the bus, see ya later alligator.
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule July 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh no!!!! Ven is Dylan's 'mystery' brother and he slept with Nathan!!! I can see that causing friction between them like awkward moment. Oops, this can't be good news. Is he older or younger than Dylan? I can't wait for Dylan and Nathan too set eyes on each other again after all these years. If Dylan's father dies, maybe at the funeral?
person dazedandconfused
schedule July 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
The nerve of Uncle Riley calling Dylan right out of the blue like that to tell him about his so called father and then almost causing him to have a car accident by announcing he has a brother!!!!!! Well, Ven is obviously Dylan's sibling but where were they hiding him all this time? Did Dylan's dad have an affair before his mom died? Then on top of that he called Dylan selfish? I mean for real? This guy is a totally dick wad. I wonder if Ven had a better upbringing then Dylan. It sounds like Uncle Riley is close to him too. Alright, you have to update soon, like soon, ok? I want my Dylan and Nathan reunion very soon. Oh, does Ven know he has a brother too or were they keeping that a secret from him? Oh crap, he slept with Nathan too!
person reader1962
schedule July 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Fix your disclaimer. I dont want this hidden !
person yuurimaoh
schedule July 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
damn. nothing quite like coming home, huh dylan? I sympathize. I'm curious about his brother, but I'm still counting the minutes until dylan meets nathan again.