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person dazedandconfused
schedule July 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I was ready to send a search party out to look for you, just kidding, I know you were busy with work so happy you found time to remember us even though you must be exhausted.

I can't believe what Darryl did to his own son! Who is this "prominent' figure in the community or were they made up by Darryl? I really don't want Dylan donating blood or doing anything to help his dirt bag father but I also don't want him to sink down low to Darryl's and Riley's level of cruelness. I don't think he could live with himself but again maybe he could because look at what they did to him.

Is Daryl a virgin?

I will stay tuned to find out what happens when Dylan and Nathan meet again after all these years!
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule July 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am so PROUD of Dylan right now for standing up for himself. I just don't want him to turn out to be a cold and unfeeling person like his father was to him. I am worried about how badly scarred he is on the inside and hope that he can learn to forgive his father (I don't really care about Uncle Riley) so that he can heal. I also sensed his father seems changed from the person he used to be and hope he apologizes to Dylan and tells him he loves him. I can't wait till Dylan meets Ven and wonder if they will hit it off or has Uncle Riley poisoned his mind to his older brother.
person m_kren2
schedule July 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
it is a grate story, love it
person Anon
schedule July 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
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schedule July 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ooohhhh oooohhhh oooohhh, things are coming to a head. lol

Can't wait for Dylan to meet Ven! But I'm even more anxious that Dylan will be seeing Nathan again! At four!!!!

This was such a terrific chapter, TRU. I know exactly what it's like to not be with someone for many years and then as soon as you see them, it's like you feel like a little kid again who just got sent to the principal's office. And I'm not talking about a parent here, by an ex. Sad but true. Always made me feel two inches tall. So I can just imagine how Dylan felt walking into that house again after all those years and associating every room with how he used to feel. And then of course, seeing his father lying there in the hospitla bed all frail and weak, and just the sight of him bringing up all those horrible memories, it's enough to make you want to turn around and run.

And you know when Riley was telling Dylan that his father needs his blood to live, I'd tell Riley, well, you better start planning his funeral then. They have some nerve, don't they? Just assuming that Dylan would run back all sorry and dejected and wanting to give his father life again. Darryl and Riley are a bunch of idiots. They should have thought about this situation they are in now, six years ago when they were berating Dylan and accusing him of false things and kicking him out of the house. What? They never thought their actions would come back and bite them in the ass? Karma baby, it's a bitch. lol

Needless to say TRU, this was a great chapter! Could you tell I liked it? lol

Good luck unpacking from your move - hey, at least you found a place...
person wolfluv
schedule July 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
While I've been reading this story there is one person who came to mind... Chris Titis and his show called norman rockwell is bleeding if you get a chance look it up on youtube! I think you'll get a kick out of what his childhood was like... I'm glad D isn't some lil panzy when it comes to his tormemtors!!! I can't wait to see all the fireworks though with the lil bro and his biggest love and crush all coming together that is going to be epic!!!! read ya laters!!!
person dazedandconfused
schedule July 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Holy cow, you go, Dylan!!!!!!! I am glad he showed Darryl and most importantly Riley that he's not a child anymore who can be bullied into submission and that he's not going to take any crap!!!! WTG, Dylan!!!!!!!!! So, Darryl cheated on Dylan's mom? Is Ven's mom still alive? Oh, did Darryl know that Riley had called Dylan? I am so excited about him seeing Nathan again after all these years and wonder if Nathan will talk him into giving the blood transfusions. Is Ven close to Darryl or does he hate him too?
schedule July 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Success. He now has the name of his little brother. Wonder what he's like. Hang in there, Dylan.
schedule July 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Frustrates me when parents don't listen to their children when it's that important. Frustrates me even more when they don't trust their children to explain the truth. Happened to me once, too. All it took was that one misconceived moment to lose 15 years of supposed trust over a false accusation. Then, they wonder why I have trust issues now. They began them!
person dazedandconfused
schedule July 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Geeze, am I tired! We just got back from visiting my brother in NH and the traffic on the highway was murder then when we got on the side roads we had to drive over a bridge and there was a car towing a boat like two cars in front of us and the boat fell off and blocked the bridge so we had to wait until the police and tow truck came. Thank goodness my parents have an AC in their car!

Sooo, how low can this Brian get? Almost raping Dylan then threatening to kill him then telling his father he came on to him! Serously! Grrrr!!!!!! Oh, and why doesn't other workers report him for sexual harassment then dumbo Darryl would know it wasn't Dylan's fault. He's his father and should have anyway. A father should protect their child from lowlifes like that. Why does Darryl hate Dylan so much?!

I can't wait for the reunions especially with Nathan!

See you again in a week or so!!!!!!!!