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July 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh no!!!! I meant was Dylan a virgin not Darryl yew just thinking about that makes me sick. Sorry!
The reunion was well worth the wait but I am worried for Nathan now and the repercussions for him and Dylan. Mind you, Riley did deserve what Nathan dished out but I hope he doesn't end up in jail over it.
I am wondering now how Dylan is going to react to the news that Nathan slept with his kid brother even though he didn't know who he was at the time.
The reunion was well worth the wait but I am worried for Nathan now and the repercussions for him and Dylan. Mind you, Riley did deserve what Nathan dished out but I hope he doesn't end up in jail over it.
I am wondering now how Dylan is going to react to the news that Nathan slept with his kid brother even though he didn't know who he was at the time.
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July 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
"WELL" I am at a loss for words.... I will read on though! it's nothing bad it's just.... still no words... Read ya laters!
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July 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow, wow, wow, wow, like wow! I am glad Riley got what he deserved but now am afraid the police will come and arrest Nathan for assault and battery. I hope he doesn't lose his job over this. I loved their first time together but how is Dylan going to react once Ven enters the picture again. Things might get even more messier.
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July 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I back away enough from the edge of my seat long enough to stand up and cheer when Nathan socked Riley! And he kept going! Yay for Nathan for doing what someone should have done to Riley (and of course Darryl), years and years and years ago! :)
I'm so glad Nathan and Dylan just totally ran out on the rest of them and high-tailed it to Nathan's. Their reunion was wonderful, so worth the wait!
Oh, I read in one of your reviewer responses that in Texas a minor can wait until the age of twenty-six to report a sexual harrassment claim. I hope somebody knows that so they can tell Dylan. I think with Nathan by his side, he'll be able to do all the things he felt numb about doing or feeling before.
Ok, on to chapter nine!
I'm so glad Nathan and Dylan just totally ran out on the rest of them and high-tailed it to Nathan's. Their reunion was wonderful, so worth the wait!
Oh, I read in one of your reviewer responses that in Texas a minor can wait until the age of twenty-six to report a sexual harrassment claim. I hope somebody knows that so they can tell Dylan. I think with Nathan by his side, he'll be able to do all the things he felt numb about doing or feeling before.
Ok, on to chapter nine!
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July 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow, TRU! Well worth the wait, girl! lol
But the last sentence was pretty omninous. What did that mean: they're ignorant as to how their actions might jeopardize their future together? Does that have anything to do with Ven? And do Dylan and Ven look alike? Is that what attracted Nathan to Ven? Even though Nathan never saw Dylan as an adult, maybe subconsciously he saw a resemblance in Ven. Just a thought.
I did want to point out that you must have another story going on. lol Or wrote another story not long ago. Or you're reading a story with these two characters: Nick (Dylan) and Ryder (Nathan). Halfway down the page you kept switching from Dylan to Nick and from Nathan to Ryder, although Dylan/Nick was more prominent. It got to the point where I was just reading it picturing a foursome between these guys. lol :) Maybe in the next chapter they can all meet. haha Oh, and don't forget Ven - he can be the fifth. lol ;)
Awesome chapter, TRU! But I don't wanna read about any fallout, so make sure Nathan doesn't get in trouble with the suits. Oooohhh, maybe mean 'ole Darryl's heart will give out and make him keel over before they get back!! Wouldn't that be AWESOME?! hehe
But the last sentence was pretty omninous. What did that mean: they're ignorant as to how their actions might jeopardize their future together? Does that have anything to do with Ven? And do Dylan and Ven look alike? Is that what attracted Nathan to Ven? Even though Nathan never saw Dylan as an adult, maybe subconsciously he saw a resemblance in Ven. Just a thought.
I did want to point out that you must have another story going on. lol Or wrote another story not long ago. Or you're reading a story with these two characters: Nick (Dylan) and Ryder (Nathan). Halfway down the page you kept switching from Dylan to Nick and from Nathan to Ryder, although Dylan/Nick was more prominent. It got to the point where I was just reading it picturing a foursome between these guys. lol :) Maybe in the next chapter they can all meet. haha Oh, and don't forget Ven - he can be the fifth. lol ;)
Awesome chapter, TRU! But I don't wanna read about any fallout, so make sure Nathan doesn't get in trouble with the suits. Oooohhh, maybe mean 'ole Darryl's heart will give out and make him keel over before they get back!! Wouldn't that be AWESOME?! hehe
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July 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Damn it, TRU!!!! I'm at the edge of my seat here!
I can't believe Nathan went off to college for four years AND NEVER CAME BACK UNTIL AFTER HE GRADUATED!!!! Didn't his family go to his graduation? Did he then go off to med school? And he went away to college and didn't come home for Thanksgiving, winter break, spring break, THE ALMOST FOUR MONTHS OF SUMMER???? Isn't that odd? Especially since he would have loved to see Dylan during his breaks...just sayin'.
I can certainly agree with Nathan where his first instinct was to take a pillow and smother Darryl, bring him back to life, only to smother the fucker all over again. That's what he really should do. lol I'm sure Dylan won't mind.
OMG, I just thought: if Dylan AND Ven are there, OMG, does Nathan even REMEMBER what Ven looks like? And vice-versa? lol
Ok, the next chapter, dum, da-um, dum...however it's written. lol Can't wait...I'm already on pins and needles thinking about it. :)
Awesome job, TRUE! :) Oh, I noticed a typo in one paragraph, but then in the next one you wrote the word correctly. Dieing is spelled dying. Just in case you wanted to go back and fix it. :)
I can't believe Nathan went off to college for four years AND NEVER CAME BACK UNTIL AFTER HE GRADUATED!!!! Didn't his family go to his graduation? Did he then go off to med school? And he went away to college and didn't come home for Thanksgiving, winter break, spring break, THE ALMOST FOUR MONTHS OF SUMMER???? Isn't that odd? Especially since he would have loved to see Dylan during his breaks...just sayin'.
I can certainly agree with Nathan where his first instinct was to take a pillow and smother Darryl, bring him back to life, only to smother the fucker all over again. That's what he really should do. lol I'm sure Dylan won't mind.
OMG, I just thought: if Dylan AND Ven are there, OMG, does Nathan even REMEMBER what Ven looks like? And vice-versa? lol
Ok, the next chapter, dum, da-um, dum...however it's written. lol Can't wait...I'm already on pins and needles thinking about it. :)
Awesome job, TRUE! :) Oh, I noticed a typo in one paragraph, but then in the next one you wrote the word correctly. Dieing is spelled dying. Just in case you wanted to go back and fix it. :)
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July 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!! I can't wait to see the fireworks!!!! The whole should I let him live or die thing that is something that is totally believable! Oh HOW the world is going to stop and start when everyone meets in that ROOM!!!! read ya laters!!!
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July 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
First, I can't wait until the moment Nathan sets eyes on Dylan again after all these years of not knowing what happened to him. Oh, why didn't Dylan try to at least call Kyle but guess I can understand why he didn't.
Second, I hope they can bring charges Darryl for attacking a minor but unfortunately too much time has probably passed and there are statues of limitations involved.
Thirdly, Wasn't Dylan small for his age when that happened so why (especially the police) believe that he came on to the dirty scumbag Brian and not the other way around. If the police had investigated it further, wouldn't they have found out about Brian's other victims?
I am excited about the 'reunion' chapter so don't leave us hanging too long.
Oh, I hope both Darryl and Riley meet an untimely death..... snickers evilly.
Your 'girl on fire' Katniss
Second, I hope they can bring charges Darryl for attacking a minor but unfortunately too much time has probably passed and there are statues of limitations involved.
Thirdly, Wasn't Dylan small for his age when that happened so why (especially the police) believe that he came on to the dirty scumbag Brian and not the other way around. If the police had investigated it further, wouldn't they have found out about Brian's other victims?
I am excited about the 'reunion' chapter so don't leave us hanging too long.
Oh, I hope both Darryl and Riley meet an untimely death..... snickers evilly.
Your 'girl on fire' Katniss
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July 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
How touching that Kyle and Nathan's family did their best to find Dylan when he was cast out. I'm just about gnawing at the corner of my computer screen until the next chapter.
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July 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well, I screwed that review up, LOL. I am sure you know that I meant that I hope they bring charges against Brian not Darryl! I've had a busy morning and too much coffee so my typing is off, LOL.