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by TRUgrit

schedule August 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Two of my kids can recite every single line from "Scrubs". lol Funny show. I used to watch it.

Riley talking with a bruised nose was hysterical! "Fub woo", lol. Made me crack up. ;)

Darryl isn't an idiot. Even though now he sort of regrets putting that idea in Riley's head about Dylan, he still wants to make amends for the way he's acted Dylan's whole life. Yeah, good luck with that. You just threw Dylan under the bus, again.

Good luck with your mom staying with your for a whole month! :) Sorry about the cock-blocking, TRU! hehe I think that's why God made motels. lol
schedule August 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 10: Good, Ven, you go on with Harrison and leave Nathan alone! lol

Ven does sound like a good kid. I think he's a "man-whore" b/c he's trying to find some connection to someone. He seems very lonely, even when his mother is around, he's lonely. It's obvious from the chapter that she doesn't treat him with much, if any, affection. So he gets his affection by screwing around. Unfortunately, he's not going to find love that way. But things may be different with Harrison. Harrison wasn't just a one-night stand, right? I actually feel sorry for Ven, each night going out and screwing different guys, just looking to fight his lonliness. It's sad.

Ok, on to ch. 11!
schedule August 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Awww, awkward morning afters. I feel all warm and fuzzy inside. They handled that pretty well. Though, I worry about how far Riley will go.
schedule August 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, TRU! I don't know where I've been! I missed a few chapters here...oi, where is my head at? Ok, gonna go read now. lol
person reader1962
schedule August 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
:)
person yuurimaoh
schedule August 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
*stretches and reads* RL has been nothing but chaos for me, and this is the calm before the storm of even worse chaos, so I need to take the time to catch up with reading this NOW while I still have the chance. I do believe I left off on chapter 8...

Ch 8: Darryl and Riley? Well, that took me by surprise. Never would have thought it.

I just about burst out laughing when I read 'Nathan knew he needed to be alone with the young man to make up for all of their lost and wasted time. I’m never holding back.' In my mind, it meant 'let me kidnap chu, kidnap chu and never give you back, buahahaha.'

'Somehow making it out of the hospital, Nathan finally had to break their connection to get Dylan into his car.'- lmao! And that part sounded as if they were wiggling towards the exit while still clinging to each other. Ha ha, I love it.

Ch 9: Those two really are absolutely sweet together. Glad they finally got all of that out, even if it was in a rush of a storm.

Ch 10: Yes, Harrison, do jog Ven's memory. By all means.

Sounds like trouble's brewing around the corner, especially for Ven. So, I hope Harrison gives him the night of his life...again. XD Ah, how lovely it was to finally catch up!
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule August 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Tru, there is nothing more entertaining than family drama and you have hit the jackpot, LOL. Seriously, I hope things get better for all of you as I am sure it must be difficult.

Thanks for updating. I liked this filler chapter with Ven and his boyfriend Harrison. I am looking forward to them finding out about Dylan and Nathan. I think Harrison will turn out to be very protective of Ven. He reminds me of a dangerous Tiger.

Read you later.
person miles
schedule August 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ven had a fucked childhood ! I hope this new suitor will be good for him...
Poor you ! We don't choose our family, unfortunately ! Take care !
person wolfluv
schedule August 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
WELL DAMN!!! You could get movie rights to your life right now I'm pretty sure! I do how ever hope things get better for you and yours soon! Loved this chapter by the way! read ya laters!
person dazedandconfused
schedule August 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, I like Harrison and him and Ven are cute together. So, he doesn't remember sleeping with Nathan and I wonder how he will react once he learns he slept with his brother's boyfriend! So, your family drama reminds me more of the classic tv show called Dallas! Hey, maybe you could write a book about it and then it will become a bestseller, then a movie and you'll become a multi-millionaire overnight!!!!!!