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October 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Dylan and Ven both have something (at least one thing), in common: they were both hurt by people who were supposed to love them. I'm anxious to find out Ven's past.
I'm really liking Harrison - I hope he doesn't wind up betraying Ven's trust.
Great chapter, TRU! :)
I'm really liking Harrison - I hope he doesn't wind up betraying Ven's trust.
Great chapter, TRU! :)
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October 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Is it wise to make an enemy of the man who will hold your life in his hands?
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September 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is is a great story. Please continue writing this one....
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September 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, TRU! :)
I can see why Dylan wants to spare Nathan anymore trouble, but Nathan's not having any of it. lol
I'm looking forward to reading about the surgery...maybe something will go wrong there and Darryl will bite the dust. One can only hope. lol
Oh, I tried to read your review responses, but since AFF changed from .net to .org, I couldn't get on. Even when I changed it from net to org it didn't work. :(
I can see why Dylan wants to spare Nathan anymore trouble, but Nathan's not having any of it. lol
I'm looking forward to reading about the surgery...maybe something will go wrong there and Darryl will bite the dust. One can only hope. lol
Oh, I tried to read your review responses, but since AFF changed from .net to .org, I couldn't get on. Even when I changed it from net to org it didn't work. :(
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August 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
TRU, I haven't read this chapter yet, but I just wanted to ask you if you could ask your most awesomely talented beta (not that you're not, you most certainly are a hella awesome author :)), but...if you could ask Magic when/if she is going to continue her story...or maybe she'll break my heart and won't continue it. :( I have sorta given her a few pokes, but nada. But at least I know she's ok now! lol
Anyway...I will read this in the morning. Thanks, TRU! =)
Anyway...I will read this in the morning. Thanks, TRU! =)
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August 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh, oh, oh, oh, YOU'RE BACK!!!! "Hi, I've missed you!"
Darryl and Riley have got to pay for what they have done to Dylan and what they are doing now to both Dylan and Nathan! Seriously, I hate these guys and want to remove their, hmm, dicks!!!! Sorry, they really piss me off!
Darryl and Riley have got to pay for what they have done to Dylan and what they are doing now to both Dylan and Nathan! Seriously, I hate these guys and want to remove their, hmm, dicks!!!! Sorry, they really piss me off!
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August 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
The battle lines are drawn and to the victor goes the spoils, I think that's the saying. Anyway, to me it's a former of blackmail too. Darryl and Riley are the lowest of low lives. I hope that Nathan can beat them at their own game and protect Dylan and himself. Thanks for updating! I am sorry life is hectic and can sympathize with you.
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August 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
The father really get on my nerves ! I want to hurt him ! ^^'
But I think Nathan's reaction isn't strong enough... And Dylan won't say a thing ! Very irritating !
I though he decided long time ago to stop beeing a martyre...
Just tell your father to fuck off !!
Update soon, please :))
But I think Nathan's reaction isn't strong enough... And Dylan won't say a thing ! Very irritating !
I though he decided long time ago to stop beeing a martyre...
Just tell your father to fuck off !!
Update soon, please :))
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August 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That was AWESOME!!! I have some HOPE and RESPECT for Daryl if he can really pull his shit together! read ya laters!!!
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August 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
At the end of chap 10 is, that what happened and Ven doesnt remember it, or is that what happens after He is talking to Harrison and is asked are you remembering waking up with someone else?