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Where was Dureau???? Wonder what happened to the babies when she gotten grabbed?

I hope a claim can be reversed. Maybe because she didn't bite him. Poor Carys.

Wow....poor Carys being pregnant with that jerks babies. I hope you continue this story so many unanswered questions. At least the other females of Norrod's pack weren't to mean to her.

Loved it! Hope you keep writing!

Very very interested to see what's next!! :)

I love this story :) I like your writing style, and yes.. I agree with another reviewer, I weirdly like Sorro, I guess mostly because Dureau didn't show up to her claiming! I'm sure we'll get an explanation at some point, but he wasn't there for her! And I don't mean to be critical, but wouldn't it be obvious the two boys aren't hers to that other pack? Since she's not producing milk herself, and their ages would make it impossible for her to have given birth to them both, unless they have an incredibly short gestation. Plus, wouldn't Sorro have noticed she was a virgin? Other then those lil questions, I really like it, and can't wait for the next chapter. Please keep writing.

Please, I beg of you, do not abandon this story! I noticed that it hadn't been updated since July, and it's heading towards October now. I enjoyed the story line and thought you did a great job writing it. Hoping everything is alright with you! Don't give up on it; I'm sure there's others out there waiting for the next installment like I am :)

I know that I am going to get boo'ed for saying this, as well as, have rotten tomatoes and bottles of hooch thrown at me...
::sighs::
I happen to like Sorro.
I don't know why.
Maybe it's the 'goth-likes the bad boys' part of my personality that likes him.
Or maybe it is because I just watched Disney's "Beauty and The Beast" earlier today.
But, I prefer Carys to be with Sorro.
Plus I don't trust Dureau.

Sooo good! Please continue ♥♥♥

I love this story!! Pregnancy, oh no. . . Please let that rotten mate get killed off soon.