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for The Dragon and his mate

by winterwarm

person Mdelanay
schedule September 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yes!! Loved this chapter.
person wolfluv
schedule September 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OMG THAT WAS FUCKING AWESOME!!!! I'm was on the edge of my seat the whole time and now I'm crying because I'm both happy that they found the kids and sad because Tai got poisoned and because Jay and Kerr are going to have a long road ahead but the can be a good thing too! Sorry to hear about your teeth yeah I had all four of mine pulled at the same time and they were impacted meaning they were growing in sideways! I do so hope you feel better and THANK YOU FOR THIS AWESOME CHAPTER!!!!! Read ya laters!
person daqueenbee
schedule September 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
LOVED IT!!! Glad that you are feeling better.
person guesst
schedule September 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
May the healing slowly but surely begin from this point forward, hopefully forgiveness and love will follow...great update, hoping for more to follow.
person meg
schedule September 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love it
person moon1958
schedule September 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hi Nari! Thanks for the update! Glad you are feeling better now. Teeth can become a real pain if you neglect them! I also had to have surgery last year because of overcrowding. Anyways, I really liked this chapter! I'm glad Jaye knows about the children now. I really hope that one day Kerr can forgive Jaye, although I still think Jaye really has some making up to do to Kerr. Thanks!
schedule September 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh crap! I'm so sorry about your wisdom teeth. I hope you are feeling better soon. Thanks for this new chapter. It was so worth the wait. I really want Jaye to work his ass off for Kerr's forgiveness. But I don't want Kerr to forgive him for a while. I mean the guy distrusted him, left him out the blue for a woman, left him PREGNANT for that matter, and then left him alone pregnant and with a heart condition. Damn he is the crappiest mate ever!!!! I would love for the kids to get to know their father though.
person oliver twist
schedule September 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i want some moar pls. this week?
person moon1958
schedule September 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hope you're doing all right Nari? I'd love to see the conclusion of this story one day! I love the intrigue you've woven through the story.
person daqueenbee
schedule September 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
We need an update!! gotta have an update! jonesing for an update!