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for Dead On Arrival

by vbruce

person smint45
schedule March 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
great new chapters^^ I like this story a lot!!!! Hope to hear from you again soon!!!!
person gretel_chan
schedule December 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Lovely work, Phx. I'm looking forward to more!
person Girlygirl
schedule December 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I just found this story today and BAM I'm hooked! I like the characters and the story line. You version of the afterlife is so interesting and appears to be complex. Can't wait to continue this journey with you. Write on!!! hahaha
schedule November 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done. I was laughing through almost the entire chapter. Seimei is certainly an old rascal.
I'm looking forward to seeing the two new partners interact.
May the words just flow,
Cuzosu
person smint45
schedule November 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That was great!!!! We get to see a bit of Sajonjis abilitys... I'd reall love to see more of those!!! Hope to hear from you again soon!!!!
schedule November 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha, the more I read of the Magician - and his family - the more I like him! And them! ;)

Stubborn characters...I have similar problems. *rolls eyes* I had four - count 'em, FOUR! - stubborn snarly males balking over bits and pieces of my latest chapter, not to mention one irritable dominant female! And then I threw the puppy prince's wiles at the youngest stubborn male and somehow all their stubborn resistance collapsed like Jenga blocks falling. *shrug* Distraction works for me. Have you tried it?

Regardless, it's nice to read more! And, if distraction fails, I find that throwing some of the grumbling characters at one another tends to help. Except that one time.... Apparently, having an inability to kill another character due to some unknown author's motives is infuriating. I could have empathized, but, being said author in question...well, I ended up throwing another three people at him, and he fist-fought the first, kicked the second off him and refused to talk, and finally was molested by the third one. *shakes head* I tell you, sometimes characters don't make sense. Not that you probably needed me to tell you that. *sweatdrop*

Looking forward to reading more! I hope they all cooperate this time!

May the words just flow,
Cuzosu
person smint45
schedule November 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Short chapter but great non the less!! Hope to get to read more of this story soon!!!
person Tazzy
schedule November 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
*grabs katana, tanto, and wakasashi* *smirks and hides them even better*

Love the story and hopefully that will help His Highness talk more.
person Anon
schedule November 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Good story, thanks for the udpate, plese give us another soon!
person smint45
schedule September 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That was fantastic!!!! But so short..... I really hope to read a lot more of this soon!!!!