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for Control

by dantae

person TRUgrit
schedule July 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I do love the dash of darkness you've got going on in Ash's mind. And Aiden's almost instinctual dominance is (no lie) really hott. Can't wait to hear more of Ash's past and how this will affect his future. There's some really great set up you did with the first chapter. Can't wait for more!!
person Roya7777
schedule July 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting! Please update soon ^_^
person Nina
schedule July 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story, can't wait for getting to know Ash better, the same for Aiden and Damon, they really are interesting characters. Please keep updating xxx
person TT
schedule July 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Good first chapter, can't wait to read chapter 2
schedule July 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Interesting concept, I like this so far.