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July 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed reading the first chapter and this this story has great potential. I feel bad for Andy having lost so much in his young life and admire Chris for stepping up to the plate and taking responsibility for a handicapped child whose not even a relation. I do think you should consider looking for a beta in the forum or maybe one of your readers would be happy to help you out. I noticed some minor spelling errors that can be easily found by a read over. Good job, please continue writing this and I can't wait until Nate shows up to give them an estimate on the ramp.