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I like this story so far^^ lets see where this is going^^

Niiiiiiiiiice. Color me intrigued!

That was awsome. No one likes to tackle the beast on human sex, but I give you props for pulling off a fine success.

Holy.... Lol visceral, dude. The violence of the bonding was too cool.

All I can manage right now is WOAH! An awesome kinda of woah. great job and can't wait for the next update

Great writing! I'm very very anxious for moreeee!

I love this! Especially Jayden's confusion and cluelessness tagged with instincts he cannot control. I mean who doesn't love a domineering werewolf who is extremely protective of his 'pack'.

Dude that was raw. Pretty sure there for a second I could smell blood (I was also cooking so that might've been it) but the writing continues to be magnetic. I always love when writers show the duality of their characters because it's so close to real life. Very rarely is a person wholly wicked. Instead we all carry that seed within us. It just depends on whether or not you want to be honest with yourself about it. So thanks for the second chappie and please continue! I look forward to seeing if there will be hell to pay from the men he attacked... There will be blood tonight!

Ok so even tho I feel like I've read a story like this somewhere I really like your character's so far. Kinda snarky, but only because they're being honest. Plus they're really fun. Especially jayden. I can't say to read more.