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for Jayden's Pack

by Kotarn

person Anon
schedule March 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this so far! I love the descriptions and the premise! I can see this VInce guy turning later and being an even more annoying and threatening goon boss. goodness. I am so excited to see how these two men deal with their new pack situation though! Update!
person Moku_Sui
schedule September 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
when's the next chapter coming out?
person Anon
schedule January 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Got me intrigued, more please.
person Nbsiren
schedule January 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
looking forward to more^^
person smint45
schedule January 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
glad you are back^^It has been a long time^^ Thans a lot for the update!!! Poor Fernando.... hope he will be ok in time^^ See you again soon!!!!
person makeme
schedule January 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Sweet story. I like the plot and how smoothly everything plays out. Great work developing the characters so far. Can't wait to read more
person wolfluv
schedule July 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wolves,men, loansharks FULLMOON..... HELL FUCKING YEAH!!!! read ya laters!!!
person smint45
schedule June 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Nice^^ So now Fernado is a werewolf too^^ Can'twait for more^^ See you!!!
person TRUgrit
schedule June 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ok u had me going there for a sec but u turned it around with the end. U've got a fun blend of violence and humor and it does as you switch between the pov's of your characters. I like it. That's not always an day thing to pull off but you seem to be doing it pretty seamlessly. Severely looking forward to the next chapter :-D
person midnightsscream
schedule June 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh thank goodness Fernando survived those gunshots. I was extremely worried there. great job!

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